Some people are of opinion that women should play equal role in police or Military forces like army. Others believe that these work are unsuitable for women’s. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, there is hardly any area where women’s have not proved their mettle. They are in space research, military services, politics and air force services, the list goes on. In spite of above facts some percentage of gender biased population still prejudice against the participation of female in security services, because of comparatively less physical strength and more emotional behavior than male. In my Opinion, Women’s are prosperous and diligent militants and their strong determination and endeavor helps them to achieve the set targets.
On one hand, Physical strength is considered as fundamental metric, to become a militant. Being little weak in strength women are often deter by some of the people to become a militant, because for catching a terrorist or the criminal who jumps from one roof to other require lot of power and courage, that sometimes females are not able to attain, and loose the culprit. This example prove their perspective. Moreover, the other reason for discouraging the female is their emotional behavior, as It is known to all that women’s are more emotional that the men, so surviving in the areas where accidents, killing, murder and rape are very common can provide them stress and make them emotionally weak, which sometimes leads into unfair decision. For illustration, in case of rape, culprit emotional lies to save himself in front of women officer can confuse her and affect in taking decision.
On the other hand, women’s have a great influential capacity and leadership quality, so in cases, where government needs to console the public, women officer can do it more effectively than anyone else, because of their sensitive nature people get easily influenced, so in this case their emotional nature act as weapon. Sometimes, the officer’s this weapons, can help the person to testify against the culprit so that culprit can be easily punished. In addition to that, there are certain religion, according to which male cannot touch the female criminal while arresting or investigation, in such cases women officers is intrinsic. For instance in India, a male police always needed to be assist with the female colleague to arrest the female criminal otherwise, he cannot arrest the criminal. Furthermore, now it is compulsory in some country to take the same military training by both the genders, and women’s are finishing that easily, so physical strength should not be considered as an impacting factor any more. Such as In Israel for 2 years military training is compulsory to all civilians, and almost 50% of their military force have females and considered as the strongest defense system.
In conclusion, security service choose the militants on the basis of the capacity and their ability not on some dogmatic facts. Females need to be given and equal opportunity to have lucrative career, as equivalent decision making will unite the country and going to make a strong defense system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 1615.20841683 155% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24476987448 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81877118931 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52719665272 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 506.74238477 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5211777524 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.470588235 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1176470588 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191848064657 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595832147255 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428435880849 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108897861918 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466321654992 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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