The space travel is fantastic these day and they are very fascinate towards its but there are many environmental problems in our planet we should resolve the problems or travel space and spend a lot of money.
The substantial influence of environmental issues has sparked the controversy over recent year. These days, there is an ongoing discussion between people about investing money in space travel is good thing to do rather than looking after the social problems first. This essay will elaborate the both sides of the argument and I will share my opinion at the end.
At the outset, there are myriads of reasons why space travel is vital, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that enhance the visibility of globe. In addition, we could be in a position you predict the nature in advance. As an illustration, satellites are capturing the world images and help us to be prepared for any natural disaster. Because of this reason, without any second thoughts spending money on space related activities will be best thing do.
Nevertheless, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that social concerns are the significant factor to be considered first, but the most predominant lies in the fact that people's jobs. Furthermore, we need jobs to lead life without any doubts so government should be handy to invest in such platforms. For instance, investing money on the city renovation will create jobs for various field experts. For this reason, spending money on social issues most important than anything.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that which thing is critical for spending money either space travels or environmental problems. In my opinion, I would strongly recommend that spending money for atmosphere studies are important at the same time local issue should be sorted out first to lead prosperous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 448, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
... money on space related activities will be best thing do. Nevertheless, some people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, second, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14338235294 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70124032369 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606617647059 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3595172434 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.615384615 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182923309738 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644440116646 0.0925447433944 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630815939588 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118740548155 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418044154716 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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