Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crime. Others think it has other functions. Discuss the two views and give your opinions.
In the recent years criminal activities and punishments rates are predominantly high. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about cell could be used only for the punishment of crimes but some people believes it has other usages as well. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and I will share my opinion outdo latter.
At the outset, there are myriads of arguments on usage of prison could be only for punishment by committing crime scenes. Without any doubts we have been practising the prisons only for people considered as guilty. For example, if someone murders his enemy to take revenge then eventually that person will put into cell because of the crime scene. Therefore, many people still holding strong comments on usage of prison could only for committing crime scene.
On the other hand, we have so many other actions that people does against laws. Firstly, there are many occasions people get bribe in government offices. Secondly, many people still violate government rules like not following traffic rules which could cause serious accidents. Thus, people usually conclude that prison serves various purposes.
In conclusion, there are strong arguments on both sides for various usages are applicable for prison or not. In my opinion, I would strongly recommend that prison could be used for any purpose which is against government laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15111111111 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39906977857 2.71678728327 88% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5035444766 50.4703680194 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.1538461538 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.25397266985 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 2.75862068966 362% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21866397605 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825042145948 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599279212173 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132688344308 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482204911357 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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