Today more and more tourist are visiting places where conditions are difficult , such as the Sahara and Antarctic.
What the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays tourism is on peak and it is surveyed that now jet-setters always try to visit the unique tourist places, where the weather conditions are very unrealistic according to their interest and choices. I delve about the benefits and drawbacks of this type of tourism in this essay.
On the one hand, with the excess of tourism, numerous common tourist places are polluted with the increasing number of tourists and their garbage. Owing to this, sightseers want to discover such places where they could find peace and nature love. For instance, Most of the young Indian people visit Triyund, where they meet with their soul instead of the crowd. Definitely it is beneficial for the local state to boost up their income.
On the other hand, sometimes situations became worst at the places where the atmospheric conditions are not up to the mark. Because it is not easy for the rescue teams and medical teams to reach such place very soon, Resulted many tourists lose their life even find out their dead bodies is also a difficult task. Apart from this, majority of people do not do analysis about the animals and species, which are living there. Due to this sometimes a trip becomes a dangerous adventure.
To conclude, a person can visit any place according to his interest, but one should do a prior analysis about the suitable conditions of the place and also one should have proper information about the emergency teams and moreover government should declare some dangerous zone, where the entries of the visitors should be banned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, apart from, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93486590038 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41904798068 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.0765741849 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.090909091 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258891725187 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859928487588 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564282796684 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148052359893 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387027080532 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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