International travel is extremely popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In the modern world, travel abroad has been a matter of great concern. Oversea trips are becoming a fundamental activity of individuals in the daily life. This following essay will analyze both merits and demerits of this tendency.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some critics content that travelling to different countries brings their own advantages for both local residents and visitors. This is because of tourism greatly the national economy. In tourist hot pots, hordes after hordes come to visit local destinations which create a whole host of jobs related to service and tourism for local people. This is well illustrated by the evidence that a report of the Vietnamese government shown that in 2017, in Sapa – one of the most famous destination in Vietnam, 23% service and accommodation jobs were created and contributed even 40% GDP of Laocai Province. In addition to that, tourism also facilitates visitors enhance their knowledge about the culture and customs of new countries which useful for them in the long run. Therefore, it is believed that abroad tourism has their own advantages.
On the other hand, some people also think that international visitors bring detrimental consequence for local people and environment. First of all, the more tourists come, the more harmful they bring to the natural landscape. For example, in Mua Cave, one of the invaluable hesitate of Ninh Binh, Vietnam was dramatically destroyed. One of the primary reason is the overwhelming visits of travellers, especially international visitors. Secondly, local people tend to lose their original career such as fishing and farming, instead of working in the service sector. This trend perhaps results in ruins their unique cultural, which mainly appealing visitors. In some points in the future, individuals in famous destination would rely on tourism and the environment surrounding them maybe would destroy if they do not have any policy to protect it. It is trued that international tourism also has their own demerits.
In conclusion, travel abroad have both benefits and drawbacks, however, I believe this trend would quickly develop in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28323699422 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76936530803 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583815028902 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4225115232 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.555555556 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118312645515 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394150442781 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415471791448 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881279520678 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030202723242 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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