With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
The impact of this phenomenon on people. Currently, increasing and developing of new technology is available for everyone and these machines are able to do the work which people used to do.I suppose I will definitely believe that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.
First and foremost it is very useful for the country with improving of new technology and creating more functional machines which play an important role on tenacity determination. Most of the robots are able to do the work instead of employees that can be more convenient and safer for the government. An inherent sense of disbelief is apt to ruin a telecommunicated negotiation when negotiators can only see videos of each other transmitted via the internet.
On the other hand,there are profound benefits of developing new technology which can open the way for people to use more comfortable facilities and devices which enjoyed all around the world.Here some countries with increasing potential and improving of new technology such as America,Japan,Korea and other major countries growth can lead to beautiful destination.
In conclusion, it is my opinion that new technology is increasing day by day can be beneficial and it plays an essential role in our life.
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- With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 56
- With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 56
- With increasing use and development of new technology many machines are now able to do the work which people used to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23762376238 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26962490433 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579207920792 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2851788376 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.142857143 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367442387227 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158281921615 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147549232899 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225831362024 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142065282588 0.056905535591 250% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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