Some companies focus their efforts on product development, some others focus more on promotions(discounts, special offer, etc) which approach do you agree to? Explain your reasoning.
Few enterprise are focusing in their product to be bloom, while some focus more on promotions. It has many advantages and disadvantages that I will discuss.
First of all many companies are trying to make an effort so that their business industry will be more productive and maximum growth of capital will be increase. Every companies are have a very talented people that help them to design a new product that is unique so that it will be sold easily .Life for example Louis Vuitton bag is very fashionable and expensive bag that only reach people can buy it. So companies are focusing on how to improve their item that can attract consumers especially women in a third world country.
Second, there are some firm or business that focusing on a big discount or special offer. We can always see this in a Christmas season like for instance a wide of variety of bags, shoes, jacket, and a lot more that being not sold during a winter season.The kind of design or dress that exclusively in a cold weather of course they will be a promotion of it so that next holiday season they can produce new product again. Every enterprise has a target each year .
In conclusion, the success of industry will depend on how people wanted to buy the product. Especially now a days that a lot of families are facing financial crisis, they will go directly that the important things or that offer a big discount that they can save .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun enterprise seems to be countable; consider using: 'Few enterprises'.
Suggestion: Few enterprises
Few enterprise are focusing in their product to be blo...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...mum growth of capital will be increase. Every companies are have a very talented peop...
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Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...l will be increase. Every companies are have a very talented people that help them t...
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Line 2, column 294, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...is unique so that it will be sold easily .Life for example Louis Vuitton bag is ve...
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Line 2, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Life
... unique so that it will be sold easily .Life for example Louis Vuitton bag is very f...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cially women in a third world country. Second, there are some firm or business ...
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Line 4, column 254, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...t being not sold during a winter season.The kind of design or dress that exclusivel...
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Line 4, column 308, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sign or dress that exclusively in a cold weather of course they will be a promoti...
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Line 4, column 462, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... Every enterprise has a target each year . In conclusion, the success of indust...
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Line 6, column 104, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...e wanted to buy the product. Especially now a days that a lot of families are facing finan...
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Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...nted to buy the product. Especially now a days that a lot of families are facing finan...
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Line 6, column 262, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... offer a big discount that they can save .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 5.94088669951 252% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1167.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61264822134 5.00649968141 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51380196268 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553359683794 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.5328930062 50.4703680194 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.7 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186576691884 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878161851488 0.0925447433944 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990659621871 0.071462118173 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129594949122 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762193957454 0.0609392437508 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.1260098522 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.5310837438 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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