due to professional work, we ignoring family and personal work. do u agree? how diff to achieve
The importance of people ignoring family and personal life due to professional work was always a controversial topic. Some people state that due to extreme pressure and short deadlines from projects making them to ignore personal lives and families. In my opinion, it is completely agreed that due to hectic work in offices people are ignoring. The following essay would further elaborate how to overcome with these problems and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To begin with, employees are facing tough competition all around the world due to globalization and unemployment growth rate which encourage them to give their best outputs in the project. Secondly, companies are creating project deadlines for short period of time and pressurizing employees to deliver the product with in deadline mentioned which is leading to work them in weekends ignoring personal lives to demand the demands of the project. For example, stat us calls, weekend work, deployment production and fixing the code with in short period making employee to spend much of his time in office.
Furthermore, increased standard of living, variations in lifestyles, project deadlines can cause depression for the employee. It is responsible of company and managers to provide them space between personal lives and professional careers. For example, project deadlines should be increased and managers should not put pressure on employee to complete the tasks on time.
To conclude, healthy balance between professional and personal life is required to lead a prosperous life and further the companies need to give some space for employees between personal and professional lifes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in short, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45348837209 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84882666243 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542635658915 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9766954708 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.909090909 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.25397266985 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226973427851 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097533751265 0.0925447433944 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955923636762 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140958469018 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106950547479 0.0609392437508 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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