social media has replaced the traditional methods of communicating and people use more and more of social media to communicate and to follow news and events. some people think the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion with examples
Some people believe online communication have more drawbacks as compare to their advantages to the society, as online social media replaced the traditional methods of communication like post letters. I disagree with this statement as online communication advantages outweigh the disadvantages. It is fast and more reliable whereas traditional methods of communication are time-consuming.
Now everyone has their own smartphone and laptops, people can easily communicate with their loved ones which are miles away. Various types of communication apps are available either paid or free for example Skype, messenger. People who live in different countries can see each other using these video calling apps. But overuse of internet has serious conscious of humans’ life as well as on human health. People spend hours on social media and it may cause health issues like obesity, they don’t go for exercise. Tradition methods of communication like post letter are time-consuming.
Online communication makes human life simpler and more trustworthy, now can communicate more easily and fast. People can give their interview for job or interview for abroad by using video calling apps like Skype. In case of an emergency, people can communicate within minutes using social media like if anyone need help or blood people put a post on social media. Social media is also used by companies for advertisement to increase their sale. They make attractive advertisements and post on social media, it also provides jobs in the multimedia company.
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| 2018-04-04 | rimanpreet | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 597, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on like post letter are time-consuming. Online communication makes human life si...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, whereas, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46861924686 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04429464847 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581589958159 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.137941945 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3571428571 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423955761041 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149458890211 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105667677554 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318138639275 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925889828461 0.056905535591 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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