Home-schooling
Home-schooling is wildly discussed but still yield no conclusion. Some supporters are likely to see that this studied style has flexible schedule and children can learn without exhausting homework, while some critic may claim that this is concerned about the budget on required materials and students might lack of socializing of peers. In my opinion, I do strongly agree with the later because the drawbacks of homeschool do outweigh the advantages.
However, some advocators may argued studying at home children obtain real-world experiences from different communities, and different ages. Still I found that this argument is invalid since nowadays, public schools organized the curriculums that students get all necessary skills for living in the modern world. Apart from learning in lessons, tradition-school students meet a various of friends and they learn to cope with difficult faced at school themselves without assistant of their parents that lead them to get higher adaptation for being in community. These experiences can not occur from home-schooling, Therefore, is it acceptable if homeschooler lack of these skills?
On top of that, another noticeable drawback of this education is materials and methods used in each subject. Teaching children by own, parents need to prepare a lot of decent lessons and equipment for their kids despite they might not good at some contents. The calculated and data-managed software Excel Microsoft, is the important software that student must be able to use it well. In case, parents have less this software-using skill, their children probably do functions on this software ineffectively. While public schools, there are instructors teaching in specific subjects. They can offer the variety of learning methods to pupils and have suitable materials that helped student learning. Ultimately, children also have chance to exchange opinions with their classmates or teachers.
In conclusion, even though home-schooling present some minor pros, their cons are significant in lacking of socialization. So, I would like to suggest that some families which desire to organize children learning by own study and prepare about education management as much as they can and parents be concerned chance to get new real-world experiences of their children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...ferent communities, and different ages. Still I found that this argument is invalid s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, while, apart from, in conclusion, in my opinion, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1953.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54829545455 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0047190308 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4298102281 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0625 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178740296271 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685980678929 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110872755764 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128963572245 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854765257649 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.