The Arguement which appeared in the memo is pretty much clear.The arguer says that the demand of heating oil will increased in the next five years ,which is actually good sign for his company.To support this argument the arguer give several reason for this.Its says that the majority homes in the northeastern United States using oil as a fuel for heating during winter.That states also experienced a 90 days ling severe cold and the climate forecast predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years.Additionally new homes are being built in this region in response to population growth.Overall the arguer thinks for this reasons the demand of the heating oil will increase and which will profitable for their company.However the the argument seems pretty logical but ,a closer look it has certain loopholes.
First of all the arguer claim that majority of the homes of that states are use oil for heating purpose during winter.But this claimed actually lacking in evidence.It does not give us any idea actually what pecent of homes actually using oil for heating purpose.The homes are used this oil for different purpose or they have electric heater for heating system.With out actual data its impossible to support this argument on this position.
The arguer taking into acount the weather condition of that states.This year the reagioned experienced a 90 days with below normal temperature and the climate forecast predict that this weather pattern will continue several years.For this he thinks the demand of oil will increased.But the fact is weather pattern not very much accurate.So its not wise to depend on this prediction.so the argument become weak in this point.
Furthermore many new homes are being built on that states due to rise in population growth and the arguer thinks this growth will increae the oil demand.But we can not be sure that this home will use oil as heating fuel during winter.may be the new building will have central heating sytem.If this hapen than the argument position will become invalid.
To sum up,the conclusion reach that the argument lacks credebility.Since the evidence cited in tyhe analysis does not lend strong support to what the arguer claims.to make the argument more convincing the arguer should provide more valid and concrete information.
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287564766839 0.25644967241 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.165803108808 0.15541462614 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10103626943 0.0836205057962 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0388601036269 0.0520304965353 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0233160621762 0.0272364105082 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121761658031 0.125424944231 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0466321243523 0.0416121511921 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70407458527 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0155440414508 0.026700313972 58% => OK
Particles: 0.00518134715026 0.001811407834 286% => OK
Determiners: 0.142487046632 0.113004496875 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0310880829016 0.0255425247493 122% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0155440414508 0.0127820249294 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2315.0 2731.13054187 85% => OK
No of words: 377.0 446.07635468 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14058355438 6.12365571057 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.57801047555 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.387267904509 0.378187486979 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270557029178 0.287650121315 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177718832891 0.208842608468 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.100795755968 0.135150697306 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70407458527 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 207.018472906 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485411140584 0.469332199767 103% => OK
Word variations: 51.5998483757 52.1807786196 99% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 75.4 23.2022227129 325% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 194.585302631 57.7814097925 337% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 463.0 141.986410481 326% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.4 23.2022227129 325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.724660767414 331% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 3.58251231527 949% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 102.455702918 51.9672348444 197% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.8405768891 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315096427958 0.441005458295 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.311436435602 0.135418324435 230% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0892093098791 0.0829849096947 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.58762219726 170% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.57009245868e-16 0.147661913831 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.212246934095 0.193483328276 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786639784306 0.0970749176394 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362018280442 0.42659136922 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0805438980702 0.0774707102158 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212246934095 0.312017818177 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786639784306 0.0698173142475 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 14.657635468 34% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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