The statement present a very narrow perspective.The author of this statement claimed that college and universities should require to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.May be the author think that it will enhance their performance as a mentor with in the class.Beacuse the teacher will spent most of his time in the field which he inculcate.For being a good teacher its not necessary for a person to spent his most of the time within his academic field.A faculty position for a person may be a source of his livelihood and he may have another hobby or passion.Thats why im not much supportive to this view.
Its a good thing if any faculty of a university spent his extra time outside his academic world with in his academic field.This will enhance the knowledge about his academic field.He then explain the subject phenomenon to his student more diversly.By doing this he always up to date about current development of his academic field which will help him a lot during his teaching.On that position the authors position may be acceptable.
Now considering a physics faculty who have hobby of writting or in any musical instrument.Out side his academic world he spent his time in writing or with his favorite instrument.This does not mean that he is not a good teacher.Its possible for a person be a good physics teacher as well as a writer.And its most possible for this teacher to explain his student about the world outside physics.Students will have a good perspective about the real world.
Further more a person should be free about his choice,its his basic rights.no one have the right to force any one to do any thing.
At the end i want to say if any faculty want to spent his time outside his academic world within his field which he taught,then its good thing.but universities should not force any faculty to do that.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238805970149 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.134328358209 0.157235817809 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.089552238806 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0507462686567 0.0497285424764 102% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10447761194 0.0444667217837 235% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.125373134328 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0208955223881 0.0406280797675 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87245002996 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0358208955224 0.030933414821 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128358208955 0.0997080785238 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0328358208955 0.0249443105267 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149253731343 0.0148568991511 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1899.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 326.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82515337423 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.315950920245 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.260736196319 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153374233129 0.200843997647 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101226993865 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87245002996 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 219.290929204 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435582822086 0.48968727796 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.1239989303 55.4138127331 78% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6194690265 24% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 65.2 23.380412469 279% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 192.410602618 59.4972553346 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 379.8 141.124799967 269% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.2 23.380412469 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.4 0.674092028746 208% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.21349557522 595% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 91.2736196319 51.4728631049 177% => OK
Elegance: 1.32989690722 1.64882698954 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369606267629 0.391690518653 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.308496229136 0.123202303941 250% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.093870512375 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.547984918172 182% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.92296268638e-16 0.149214159877 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239731323716 0.161403998019 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114210827949 0.0892212321368 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.35163038293 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0998714287227 0.0692045440612 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239731323716 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114210827949 0.0653680567796 175% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 13.5995575221 37% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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