''Advertising with Cable Communication Corp. is the most effective way to increase a companys profits. Recently, Adams Car Dealership began advertising with Cable Communications, and over a subsequent 30-days period, the dealership's rose 15% over sales the previous month. In addition, the company's customer ratings show that the people who purchased new cars from Adams are more satisfied with the quality and performance of their vehicles than are car dealership customers on average. Customer satisfaction as been found to be a key factor in positive word-of-mouth publicity.''
The following argument is flawed for numerous reasons. primarily, the argument is based on unwarranted assumption that the their is an inrease in sales after Adams car dealership began advertising with the cable communication corporation which its rendering its main conclusion that advertising with cable company is the most effective way to increase a company profit invalid.
the argument has failed to provide justification that advertising with the cable company was the cause of the the increase in profit in the company. the increase in sales could have been as a result of many reasons. it could have been as a result of the timing, this time that Adam recorded more sales could have been the month of the year where by people gets a raise bonus at work and they often change their car . the raise might not exactly be a profit it might be as a result of Adam decreasing their sales price by few percent which attracts more people to buy around the period and in this case the 15% increment will just eventually fall back to the initial sales price. it could also be as a result f bill board that was placed somewhere that people gets to see often.
the argument also leaves room for unanswered questions like did Adam start making more sales immediately he entered a publicity deal with the cable company or few weeks later. did the cable company have the same result with other company yets or this conclusion was solely based on Adam alone and also what is the guaranty that if others also advertised with them it will turn out just as Adams company did.
finally the argument claim without warrant that what happened with Adam will happen again with no justification to back this up other than Adam. the argument is still flawed cause it doesn't provide supporting evidence to back up this justifications.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Primarily
...rgument is flawed for numerous reasons. primarily, the argument is based on unwarranted a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...is based on unwarranted assumption that the their is an inrease in sales after Adams car ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ased on unwarranted assumption that the their is an inrease in sales after Adams car ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... to increase a company profit invalid. the argument has failed to provide justific...
^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...with the cable company was the cause of the the increase in profit in the company. the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...with the cable company was the cause of the the increase in profit in the company. the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... the increase in profit in the company. the increase in sales could have been as a ...
^^^
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... have been as a result of many reasons. it could have been as a result of the timi...
^^
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereby'?
Suggestion: whereby
...s could have been the month of the year where by people gets a raise bonus at work and t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... at work and they often change their car . the raise might not exactly be a profit...
^^
Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... work and they often change their car . the raise might not exactly be a profit it ...
^^^
Line 2, column 680, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... fall back to the initial sales price. it could also be as a result f bill board ...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...mewhere that people gets to see often. the argument also leaves room for unanswere...
^^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Did
...h the cable company or few weeks later. did the cable company have the same result ...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ll turn out just as Adams company did. finally the argument claim without warrant that...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: finally,
...ll turn out just as Adams company did. finally the argument claim without warrant that...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...cation to back this up other than Adam. the argument is still flawed cause it does...
^^^
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion to back this up other than Adam. the argument is still flawed cause it doesnt...
^^
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... the argument is still flawed cause it doesnt provide supporting evidence to back up ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... provide supporting evidence to back up this justifications.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, still, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 316.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75632911392 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50146391077 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490506329114 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0431701703 57.8364921388 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 119.503703932 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30961938174 0.218282227539 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115146974763 0.0743258471296 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128667295778 0.0701772020484 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201855302515 0.128457276422 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124083990983 0.0628817314937 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.3799401198 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Primarily
...rgument is flawed for numerous reasons. primarily, the argument is based on unwarranted a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...is based on unwarranted assumption that the their is an inrease in sales after Adams car ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ased on unwarranted assumption that the their is an inrease in sales after Adams car ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... to increase a company profit invalid. the argument has failed to provide justific...
^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...with the cable company was the cause of the the increase in profit in the company. the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...with the cable company was the cause of the the increase in profit in the company. the ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 149, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... the increase in profit in the company. the increase in sales could have been as a ...
^^^
Line 2, column 216, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... have been as a result of many reasons. it could have been as a result of the timi...
^^
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereby'?
Suggestion: whereby
...s could have been the month of the year where by people gets a raise bonus at work and t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 414, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... at work and they often change their car . the raise might not exactly be a profit...
^^
Line 2, column 417, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... work and they often change their car . the raise might not exactly be a profit it ...
^^^
Line 2, column 680, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... fall back to the initial sales price. it could also be as a result f bill board ...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...mewhere that people gets to see often. the argument also leaves room for unanswere...
^^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Did
...h the cable company or few weeks later. did the cable company have the same result ...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ll turn out just as Adams company did. finally the argument claim without warrant that...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: finally,
...ll turn out just as Adams company did. finally the argument claim without warrant that...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...cation to back this up other than Adam. the argument is still flawed cause it does...
^^^
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion to back this up other than Adam. the argument is still flawed cause it doesnt...
^^
Line 4, column 184, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... the argument is still flawed cause it doesnt provide supporting evidence to back up ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 230, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... provide supporting evidence to back up this justifications.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, still, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 28.8173652695 90% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 2260.96107784 66% => OK
No of words: 316.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75632911392 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50146391077 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490506329114 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 705.55239521 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0431701703 57.8364921388 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 119.503703932 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 5.70786347227 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.25449101796 381% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30961938174 0.218282227539 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115146974763 0.0743258471296 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128667295778 0.0701772020484 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201855302515 0.128457276422 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124083990983 0.0628817314937 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.3799401198 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.