Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Restriction is simply defined as tasks that are put in place to serve as check in a given situation. in the old oyo empire after the king as been coronated,
there are these group of chiefs that are inaugurated and are referred to as the oyo mesi. when any decision is been made by the king, the validity of the authority of the king is allowed to checked just so to be sure its within reasoning. In a situation whereby a king said a man should be beheaded for an unjust cause{ probably has a beautiful wife the king wants to take over}, if the oyo mesi who serves as the check to the king authority ain't there, then a man might just die unjustly. so I strongly believe that restrictions should be put in place on research and development, first the government placing few restriction on the on the scientific research and development can be a really good thing cause it will regulate the amount of so many factors that should be use in a project in limits quantity.
Cancer is a research topic that millions and thousands of dollars has been invested into but even, if a person has a stage for cancer and their is no chance of ever recovering if there are no restrictions at place in place by the government had not place any rules of limitations in place then the doctors could have tone to extent of given patient the option of death or to be opted as guinea pigs or any other absurd rules but in a place where rules are set in place there are limits to that can be done .
Another angle to look at the organ replacement surgery, if there are no rules put in place by the government the system would have been full with nepotism because if a family member of one of the member of the clinical staffs needs a heart surgery and a regular citizen also needs the same heart, if there are no rules in place it is most certainly going to the family member but because the government has put forward a donor list that must be followed then in this case only will the heart go to the deserving person .
in conclusion putting rules in place by the government on research isn't a bad either and we all can get use to a little bit of rules and restrictions because without it there is no limit to danger than human are capable of doing .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3135391924 5.05705443957 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42408317623 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475059382423 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.0359550562 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.460958391 60.3974514979 249% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 227.0 118.986275619 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 52.625 23.4991977007 224% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.21951772744 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15063514909 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647046999047 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535693806941 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788593377756 0.150359130593 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364164668546 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 14.1392134831 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.62 48.8420337079 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.61 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 11.2143820225 203% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.