The master's plan is that the government came up the name as "Apex Corporation" about first introduce the coffee production. They must run a campaign to gather many agreements from people to vote for so that they increase demands for any coffee.
Apex Corporation is releasing a new line of coffee in the future; however, they have not yet released. Dedicated to the corporation, it was first introduced to the new coffee into major supermarkets such as Safeway, Albertsons or any marketplace. This could be similar to Starbucks, just selling major products like souvenir cups. This also could be more merchandise everywhere in the world. Apex corporation would appreciate offering "Gourmet select" which is a new line of coffee. WIth much supervision, they hope to offer decent products in the world.
The headquarters will run an advertising campaign on television and radio when releasing the brand to several major chain restaurants. It feels like when the market price increase by many customers who purchased products, then the market would stay the same leading 2 billion dollars. The marketing goal is to gather many petitions as much as possible to maintain Apex Corporation. However, the worst economy that the environment goes down that they do not have enough products to make. The government must take action on how they would improve productivity. The bottom line depending on how many customers purchased the corporation makes money on that.
The turning point of the corporation that they could run business and live large. It depends on their transaction about their good top sellers in the coffee market. This is what the corporation is about when it comes to the future environment. I hope to have the sustainable sales in which would negotiate. With much appreciation, the world turns out good depends on the customers and making the best production.
- "To answer the increased demand for artisan coffee, Apex Corporation is releasing a new line of coffee, "Gourmet Select." Apex Corporation will first introduce the coffee into major supermarkets, where it hopes word-of-mouth advertising will sustain sales 23
- Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy. 58
- Universities should require students to take courses only within those fields they are interested in studying. 50
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mi 35
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
it is not right on the topic.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 306 350
No. of Characters: 1530 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.182 4.7
Average Word Length: 5 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.736 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.105 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.115 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.305 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.486 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.043 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he corporation makes money on that. The turning point of the corporation that t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 2260.96107784 70% => OK
No of words: 306.0 441.139720559 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97621288507 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 204.123752495 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.27997563 57.8364921388 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8421052632 119.503703932 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 23.324526521 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05263157895 5.70786347227 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319448931776 0.218282227539 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880284265652 0.0743258471296 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110452698542 0.0701772020484 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192996700438 0.128457276422 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108190172278 0.0628817314937 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.3799401198 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.3550499002 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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