Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
In the argument given, author tells us about Arctic deer of Canadian islands. He tells that they have pattern of migration from one region to another in cold days and the frozen sea help them in migration. Further, tells us that due to global warming the sea ice is melting and just deer are not able to migrate this has lead to there decline. This does not seems to be proper reasoning given as it contains en numerous assumptions and loop holes.
Firstly, author tells us about report given by local hunter about decline of deer and clearly stated reason as global warming for declination. Here author assumes report is reliable. It is not stated about sample population on which survey has been conducted, survey dates are missing, area in which survey is conducted is not specified and many more questions arise. There may be some other reason of decline of deer which author may have missed out, such as local hunter may have been responsible for this decline and are blaming global warming to hide there mischievous. Thus, with lack of details we can not accept the report as an evidence.
Furthermore, author telling about migration pattern of deer assumes that all deer migrate to some other area in cold days. There may be a case that some islands may sustain food throughout the year, thus, deer may not necessary migrate to any other reason. Not only this but also there is possibility that deer are aware of danger in the migration areas, so, to be safe they have stopped migration. Thus, en numerous possibilities may give rise to doubts in given statement.
While concluding author tells us that global warming lead to stop migration pattern of deers, which has resulted in declination of deer. This is really very vague conclusion to accept as author is considering only a small set of reasoning behind declination. The declination of deers may be resultant of increasing cold in the particular area, unavailability of water, changes in climate in the particular regions, attack of local hunters, permanant migration to some other regions and many more. This makes us aware about authors optimal thinking about reasons have lead to wrong statement to conclude.
At last, author's statment about pattern of migration from one region to another in cold days and the frozen sea help them in migration and due to global warming the sea ice is melting and just deers are not able to migrate this has lead to there decline is really inadequate to accept. To make it a strong argument author must provide more evidence to prove his conclusion.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 438 350
No. of Characters: 2072 1500
No. of Different Words: 184 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.575 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.731 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.414 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.053 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.49 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.579 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.341 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.122 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'patterned'.
Suggestion: patterned
...nadian islands. He tells that they have pattern of migration from one region to another...
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Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...as lead to there decline. This does not seems to be proper reasoning given as it cont...
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Line 1, column 359, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...as lead to there decline. This does not seems to be proper reasoning given as it cont...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, really, so, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 2260.96107784 94% => OK
No of words: 438.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48925570102 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438356164384 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 705.55239521 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5351659344 57.8364921388 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.421052632 119.503703932 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26315789474 5.70786347227 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133706134178 0.218282227539 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440332060975 0.0743258471296 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376968270406 0.0701772020484 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842702602301 0.128457276422 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241464880484 0.0628817314937 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.3799401198 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.3550499002 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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