The petitioner in the argument haven`t given the proper data about the argument from which we can consider the point of argument. he should provide the analytical and theoretical data from which we can stand with the argument, there are different problem regarding the argument which are not taken in consideration as follows .
First of all, the petitioner not given the analytical data regarding the placement and breadth requirement in the university it is perfunctory detailed provided by the petitioner in the argument. The purpose of higher education is to prepare students for the future is good considerable statement but the petitioner should provide the proper example over it for taking it into consideration.
Secondly, the classes school is in the rural area due to which it is obliviously the silicon valley student will acquire more jobs than the classen students where they have a good gesture and posture than the classen students, however the students of classen not have the interesting subject to learn on there demand as compete to the other school, therefore the students of classen not have placement than other college.
Finally, petitioner have said that the students of the classen have the disadvantage of the burdensome of the breadth requirement where they have more given thesis than the other college providing the proper lot`s of work than the other college because of which it may get the problem for burden to students of the classen which get affects to there job.
In sum, the argument should contained a proper analytical and quantitative data regarding the classen students, which is useful to stand with the argument said by petitioner over the classen students about there school environment .
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- Argument analysis The purpose of higher education is to prepare students for the future but classen students are at a serious disadvantage in the competition for post college employment due to the university s burdensome breadth requirements classen s 55
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 281 350
No. of Characters: 1430 1500
No. of Different Words: 116 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.094 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.089 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.686 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 55 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 46.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.795 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.55 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.912 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.234 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The petitioner in the argument haven't given the p...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... we can consider the point of argument. he should provide the analytical and theor...
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Line 1, column 254, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
... with the argument, there are different problem regarding the argument which are not t...
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Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he argument, there are different problem regarding the argument which are not tak...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re not taken in consideration as follows . First of all, the petitioner not giv...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lytical data regarding the placement and breadth requirement in the university it...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onsiderable statement but the petitioner should provide the proper example over i...
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Line 7, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...acement than other college. Finally, petitioner have said that the students ...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r college. Finally, petitioner have said that the students of the classen h...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oner have said that the students of the classen have the disadvantage of the bur...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... which it may get the problem for burden to students of the classen which get aff...
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Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... students about there school environment .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 2260.96107784 65% => OK
No of words: 281.0 441.139720559 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24911032028 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78167068825 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 204.123752495 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430604982206 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 705.55239521 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.8473053892 175% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6805910841 57.8364921388 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 210.714285714 119.503703932 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1428571429 23.324526521 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 5.70786347227 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322200609268 0.218282227539 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152352771409 0.0743258471296 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823230549432 0.0701772020484 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182426096808 0.128457276422 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690551660067 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 14.3799401198 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 48.3550499002 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.197005988 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.06 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.32208582834 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 98.500998004 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 12.3882235529 129% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.1389221557 162% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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