According to the statement given by the Centerville high school that to provide course to students due to higher increased in accident over past 2 years, these statement can not judge the author argument properly there are many reason which does not justified by these argument as followed.
First of all, the author have just said about the driving course to the school children but not giving any proper reason for it , Why it is possible in Centerville high school; student only not in other school?, these statement should be clear from all perspective by the author so it may be clear to compulsory the student in the Centerville for driving school.
Second, Why only in Centerville city only facing these accidents not in other city?, author should analysis the road safety and roads construction in the Centerville city to know what is the major impact due to which the teenage age accident caused more than other group of age. however, we know about the teenage driving skills how they drive because most of the teenaged didn't carried license to and driving in inappropriate manner and avoid the traffic rules to which tends to accidents,
Thirdly, from the Centerville argues about the all students driving school classes may be help them to get easily license but some may get passionate about driving and tends to drive only instead of other classes so it should be taken in mind and should be decide where it should make compulsory or not to the students of Centreville. the Centerville school should investigate the major problem over road accident from what it caused and what is the reason?.
Finally, The argument seems not correct because of the lees evidence by the author to stand on its point. so from my opinion it is not agreeable for taking the argument in to the workable mode the author should investigate all cause and provide good analytical and quantitative report over it than it should apply over the school for thee student of Centerville.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 338 350
No. of Characters: 1608 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.288 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.757 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.471 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 74 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 67.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.784 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.595 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.595 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.319 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...ncreased in accident over past 2 years, these statement can not judge the author argument prope...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
... the author argument properly there are many reason which does not justified by these argum...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this argument' or 'these arguments'?
Suggestion: this argument; these arguments
...many reason which does not justified by these argument as followed. First of all, the author...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ese argument as followed. First of all, the author have just said about the driv...
^^
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... but not giving any proper reason for it , Why it is possible in Centerville high ...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this statement' or 'these statements'?
Suggestion: this statement; these statements
...ool; student only not in other school?, these statement should be clear from all perspective by...
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Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cing these accidents not in other city?, author should analysis the road safety a...
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Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...nt caused more than other group of age. however, we know about the teenage driving skil...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...they drive because most of the teenaged didnt carried license to and driving in inapp...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccidents, Thirdly, from the Centerville argues about the all students driving sc...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the all students driving school classes may be help them to get easily license b...
^^
Line 4, column 240, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f other classes so it should be taken in mind and should be decide where it shoul...
^^
Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decided'?
Suggestion: decided
... should be taken in mind and should be decide where it should make compulsory or not ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... or not to the students of Centreville. the Centerville school should investigate t...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...ce by the author to stand on its point. so from my opinion it is not agreeable for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, thirdly, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 337.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85756676558 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5220865342 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462908011869 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 22.8473053892 210% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.250471732 57.8364921388 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.857142857 119.503703932 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 48.1428571429 23.324526521 206% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 5.70786347227 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253068378385 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121494204335 0.0743258471296 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069849529013 0.0701772020484 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150333310971 0.128457276422 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636991238414 0.0628817314937 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 14.3799401198 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 48.3550499002 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.197005988 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.8 12.5979740519 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 98.500998004 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 12.3882235529 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.1389221557 190% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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