From these statment it is stated that the student should always question what they have taught instead of accepting it passively in my opinioin the statement is partially agree. because the some students are getting of afraid to ask insted of that person the other may askeds due to which it get helpfull to other student.
in sum case the student accept what the teach by the teacher, it is not good for the students to accept what they taught in class, In general the teacher always taught by there expirienced and by there knowldege
in education syestem, many students are encourage to listen to theire superior and rarely question what tthey say. usually students accept it passively. however, it may belief that student should belived to asked the question on behalf of there thinking capacity. they should be active thinker in their education careers. students should always respect what they have taught by them. students need to learn how to think for the topic.
to being, if students just accept every concept they are taught throughout school, they will loss there ability freely themselves. in my school the lecture of the biology the teacher gives the right to speak the student what they come to know at the end of the topic. the teacher use to say to read the passage one by one student where the student can get easily understand by reading the passaqe. by actively imputing the opinion we get independent to think and asked the question, sometime the thought of teacher and ours are different but it help to discuess the more informatioon on different student perspective where they have the different opinion regarding the topic .
students should be active thinkers in their school careers and thedy should devloped skill to think independently. if a student passively accepting all the information which is taught by thew teacher than the studennt will notg become independent to decide, where they come to know they can solved problem but due to the restricetd by theire behaviour they can not solved . however there are some historical fact where the dates can not change it remains same around the decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, regarding, so, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1773.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.925 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44689795577 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477777777778 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.2565922248 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.2 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.548577716959 0.243740707755 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198526778774 0.0831039109588 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15976255197 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345523974577 0.150359130593 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093028920627 0.0667264976115 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.