The Company X has implemented a policy of working Four days instead of Five days by increasing the duration of working hours from 8 to 10 each day. The Company believes that by offering an extra day leave for the employees it will bolster employees motivation towards working as the company is benefitting them from reducing a particular day's commuting cost.
The argument states that the Company X has implemented a policy of working Four days instead of Five days by increasing the duration of working hours from 8 to 10 each day. The Company believes that by offering an extra day leave for the employees it will bolster employees motivation towards working as the company is benefitting them from reducing a particular day's commuting cost. However, the argument does not explain in detail how this execution of idea helps the company to get profit and does it really help motivating the workers by increasing working hours.
First of all, the argument states that it increases working hours from 8 hours to 10 which naturally becomes tedious for some employees. It also does not state that, the company if it decreases one day will the pressure increase on the employees as it will demand to complete work of 5 days in 4 days, so the work overload will increase. It fails to explain if any kind of survey was conducted in order to know if the members of the company were happy about the new change brought about in the company. It falls short of explaining how this will cause of profit to the company . By decreasing a day of work how is it going to benefit the company ? is all what comes in my mind. The owner of the company explain that in depth which would help in evaluating that this argument holds true.
Then the other fact that is proposed is that by giving a day off would benefit the people from the cost that it costs them on travelling to commute to the office. They also imply that by doing so, it would build morales of employees as their company is doing this for them. But, have they really asked them about this assumption that they have made? Will it totally bolster them or it will simply give them one more working them and in some way make them more lethargic. If they are having 3 days off , there are possibilities it would make them sluggish. The argument does not explain the negative impacts that could happen because of the new implementation of plan.
So, I conclude by saying that, even though the Companies idea of giving a day off to employees inorder to booster their performance, lacks in many prospectives. The Company needs to have a planned executive survey, to ask all the employees that is it really profitable to them by reducing their one day charges and simultaneously putting pressure o the remaining four days. And also evaluate that the new policy is really making a profit to the Company.
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- The Company X has implemented a policy of working Four days instead of Five days by increasing the duration of working hours from 8 to 10 each day. The Company believes that by offering an extra day leave for the employees it will bolster employees motiva 63
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 444 350
No. of Characters: 2001 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.59 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.507 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.445 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 127 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 56 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 35 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.014 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.522 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.174 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'day'?
Suggestion: day
...fitting them from reducing a particular days commuting cost. However, the argument ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 36, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to motivate' or 'motivate'.
Suggestion: to motivate; motivate
... to get profit and does it really help motivating the workers by increasing working hours...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... change brought about in the company. It falls short of explaining how this will...
^^
Line 14, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...this will cause of profit to the company . By decreasing a day of work how is it ...
^^
Line 15, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
...ow is it going to benefit the company ? is all what comes in my mind. The owner of...
^^
Line 23, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ethargic. If they are having 3 days off , there are possibilities it would make t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, then, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 28.8173652695 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 444.0 441.139720559 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7027027027 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.56307096286 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48979318658 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 204.123752495 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454954954955 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 625.5 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.673141484 57.8364921388 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.894736842 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3684210526 23.324526521 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 5.15768463074 504% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476001024865 0.218282227539 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155009667707 0.0743258471296 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.174057828227 0.0701772020484 248% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146835657036 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152176541394 0.0628817314937 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.3550499002 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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