the funding that is used for various Space Projects should be decreased in
order to use the funds for other scientific projects.
The world is revolutionizing day by day and there are various developments
and upcoming seen in the various scientific projects. Every nation all over the
world is inculcating and implementing new researches for the development of
the nation. The projects like Chandrayaan launch ,then various other Space
projects are launching day by day. I agree with the author's suggestion that,
the funding that is used for various Space Projects should be decreased in
order to use the funds for other scientific projects.
First of all, there are many problems that the entire world is facing and it needs
utmost importance. The recent study shows that more than 1 lakh people all
over the world have died within the past two months due to heavy rains. There
is no doubt, that the government all over the world is working on projects of
preserving rain water and building up places for conservation of water.
However, it still needs to implement more projects where the flood water can
be used for places which have paucity of water. Floods are natural incidents
that happen which cannot be avoided, however, implementing projects before
hand that could decrease the severity of natural incidents are really important
and i believe the government should use as much funds for this project.
There are many other scientific projects which are needed for the day to day
living of people and which needs to be prioritize first. Even though we live in a
highly modernized world, there are still places which still have minimum access
to the electricity and water. Thescientific reasearches and projects should be
equatise between the rural and the urban areas. Since, the rural areas still lack
in many aspect, there should be more funding available for the
implementation of projects in rural area.
However, the fact cannot be ignored that the Space Projects are also
important. Space projects help us to know about the Universe, the
meteriological changes, about the thing happpening on Moon. It also shows
the ability of a country's advancement as very few countires have landed their
spaceships on Moon or any planet.
I conclude by saying that even though Space Projects are a boon for showing a
countries development, however the fundings for humaritarion projects should
be prioritze such as the ones that are needed for the day to day living. Food
clothing and shelter are the three fundumentals of an individuals life, and
scientific projects should be made to avoid such flooding and all the natural
calamity that causes a person to loses those three things should be taken into
consideration first.
- The Company X has implemented a policy of working Four days instead of Five days by increasing the duration of working hours from 8 to 10 each day. The Company believes that by offering an extra day leave for the employees it will bolster employees motiva 63
- Cutting down funds for these activities in order to repair the schools infrastructure ,instead believe school should find alternative ways to get funding for institution 66
- the funding that is used for various Space Projects should be decreased inorder to use the funds for other scientific projects. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 49, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on. The projects like Chandrayaan launch ,then various other Space projects are l...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... launching day by day. I agree with the authors suggestion that, the funding that is u...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 69, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
...avoided, however, implementing projects before hand that could decrease the severity of nat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 5, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ral incidents are really important and i believe the government should use as mu...
^
Line 17, column 44, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... i believe the government should use as much funds for this project. There are many...
^^^^
Line 23, column 4, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun aspect seems to be countable; consider using: 'many aspects'.
Suggestion: many aspects
.... Since, the rural areas still lack in many aspect, there should be more funding available...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 31, column 1, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...pace Projects are a boon for showing a countries development, however the fundings for h...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 33, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...helter are the three fundumentals of an individuals life, and scientific projects should b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, really, so, still, then, no doubt, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2231.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17633410673 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68272659432 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482598607889 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7837383312 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.944444444 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 35.0 4.97078651685 704% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472088840592 0.243740707755 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151122939884 0.0831039109588 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172555990563 0.0758088955206 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127007507274 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170444659533 0.0667264976115 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.