Cutting down funds for these activities in order to repair the schools infrastructure ,instead believe school should find alternative ways to get funding for institution
Schools are a temple of learning academic and non-academic subjects for
children. The co-curricular activities that are carried out in school are
important for a child to outshine in his academic career. However , the extra -
curricular activities equate the co-curricular activities in many aspects . Sports
and arts are effective in various ways for a child as they develop critical-
thinking , ethics , discipline and many more qualities that are required for
every individual to deal in their adulthood. I don't agree of Cutting down funds
for these activities in order to repair the schools infrastructure ,instead believe
school should find alternative ways to get funding for institution .
Sports and arts are creative activities that develops an individual’s confidence
and also gives a break from academic topics like maths and science for
sometime. Children in school love to play sports and take part in activities like
dancing , drawing ,singing . It creates a sense of competition and helps them to
learn how to face the obstacles that came their way during the competition. It
not only helps to increase a sense of maturity in a child by tackling all the
obstructions but also it has health benefits too. Sports keeps every indivdual
active and it prevents them from being lethargic.
The author claims that cutting down funds would help to use those funds for
repairing the buildings , however, children are the ones that require the most
attention in school and for them the important thing is the fun activities they
have which inevitably cannot be ignored for building repairs. I believe that
alternative options should be taken into considerations for collecting funds,
such as holding up a parents teachers meeting and explaining parents about
the repair of infrastructure for the benefit of children and asking them to
contribute , the other additional fund raising would be to implement certain
policies such as Alumini and for that asking the senior authorities or the
government for funding , then finding outstanding talents in school and
sending them for inter -school competitions which would increase their
schools name and would help in getting funds from the government.
I essence by saying that , decreasing the funds for activities that interests
children and taking away the element that could be a milestone for a student if
he or she would outstand that particular thing is very crucial , rather I believe
alternative strategies to increase the fund for building repair should be
implemented.
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- the funding that is used for various Space Projects should be decreased inorder to use the funds for other scientific projects. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 55.5748502994 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 2260.96107784 97% => OK
No of words: 402.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46019900498 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94319767289 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 204.123752495 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52736318408 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 705.55239521 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.8473053892 131% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.12649587 57.8364921388 246% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.846153846 119.503703932 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9230769231 23.324526521 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.70786347227 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 33.0 5.15768463074 640% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.25449101796 305% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4081469365 0.218282227539 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146404666298 0.0743258471296 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187340299502 0.0701772020484 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104416451139 0.128457276422 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120942877808 0.0628817314937 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.3799401198 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.3550499002 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.5979740519 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 12.3882235529 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.1389221557 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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