Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by 30 percent. Potential employers, looking at this dramatic rise in grades, believe that grades at Omega are inflated and do not accurately reflect student achievement; as a result, Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should terminate student evaluation of professors.
In a recent editorial, the author argues that to Omega university should terminate student evaluation of professors so as to enable the secure and better job of its graduates. The author makes the conclusion on the basis of the fact that overall student garde averages at omega university have beem risen by 30 % and still its graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby alpha university.This argument several unsupported assumptions, most notably that alpha university does not have procedure related to evaluation of professors.This argument has more merits, but it is flawed in two respects.
Most conspicuously, the argument assumes that Alpha university does not have procedure related to evaluation of teaching of professors. It is entirely possible, however it is also poosible that alpha university is already adopting the procedure that encoraged the students to evaluate the teaching of the effectiveness of the all their professors.Thus, for more clarification, author should provide details regrading the alpha university. Here details means procedures implemented in the university, Motto, Memorandum etectra. Such details makes the argument more convincing.
Additionally, the author assumes that the curriculum of both the university are same. One cannot deny that an alternative is possible that alpha univeristy provides practical knowledge to their students, where as omega university doesnot provide practical to their students. Thus In oder to make the argument more convincing, the author should provide the details regarding the curriculum adopted in the both the univeristy.
In conclusion, The argument is poorly supported and makes a number of critical assumptions. Not only does author assumes that alpha univeristy doesnot have procedure related to evaluation of teaching of professors but also assumes that the curriculum of both the university are same.In order to make an argument more admirely,the author should provide the details regarding graduates who are not able to get the job in a statistical manner.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 321 350
No. of Characters: 1730 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.233 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.389 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.881 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 85 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 20.315 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.545 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.442 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.63 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...minate student evaluation of professors so as to enable the secure and better job of it...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to enable the secure and better job of its graduates. The author makes the conc...
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Line 1, column 430, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
... graduates from nearby alpha university.This argument several unsupported assumption...
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Line 1, column 572, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ure related to evaluation of professors.This argument has more merits, but it is fla...
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Line 4, column 348, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...fectiveness of the all their professors.Thus, for more clarification, author should ...
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Line 4, column 541, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...Motto, Memorandum etectra. Such details makes the argument more convincing. Addi...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... practical knowledge to their students, where as omega university doesnot provide practi...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ot provide practical to their students. Thus In oder to make the argument more convi...
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Line 10, column 114, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assume'?
Suggestion: assume
...tical assumptions. Not only does author assumes that alpha univeristy doesnot have proc...
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Line 10, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...riculum of both the university are same.In order to make an argument more admirely...
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Line 10, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
... order to make an argument more admirely,the author should provide the details regar...
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Line 10, column 417, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a statistical manner" with adverb for "statistical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...aduates who are not able to get the job in a statistical manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, still, thus, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 55.5748502994 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 2260.96107784 79% => OK
No of words: 316.0 441.139720559 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.62658227848 5.12650576532 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13441825775 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462025316456 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59920159681 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.76692962 57.8364921388 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 161.636363636 119.503703932 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7272727273 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.70786347227 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.25449101796 228% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222595081291 0.218282227539 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889803048766 0.0743258471296 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699718535814 0.0701772020484 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144434090965 0.128457276422 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572506741348 0.0628817314937 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.68 48.3550499002 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.8 12.197005988 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.97 12.5979740519 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 98.500998004 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 12.3882235529 246% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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