The following appeared in a magazine article about planning for retirement.
"Because of its spectacular natural beauty and consistent climate, Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire. As a bonus, housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and real estate taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Nevertheless, Clearview's mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. Retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average."
The author argues boldly that Clearview should be a top-notch preference for retirees based on the natural, climatic, economy, and health advantages. However, some of those wide assumptions are flawed upto certain extent.
The arguer mentioned the natural beauty and consistent climate of Clearview as a big factor in considering this place after retirement. However, he didn't mention any particular features of the scenic beauty of the place and haven't provided any quantitative perspective of temperature change. Different people have different choices, some might prefer mountains while some prefer beaches. Few people are amused by consistent nice weather while some prefer to be in a place with slight varition in climate.
So without a proper survey, it's difficult to determine if Clearview can be the among the top places after retirement. Apart from natural beauty, the author emphasized the housing costs and real-estate taxes. While the housing costs may have decreased over past years in Clearview, the cost still may be higher than the other neighbouring town or other naturally embellished towns in the nation. Also, the most people after retirement, may be little worried about the housing cost and real-estate taxes. All they prefer is a comfortable and luxurious standard of living and the town infrastructure.
Regarding the infrastructure, although the mayor has promised to improve education, transport and public services, there is no proper evidence of their chances of education. Also, it clearly shows that there is a lot of infrastructural change needs to be done in Clearview.
The author has very vaguely mentioned the healthcare conditions of Clearview. While the number of physicians may be greater in the area, the per capita doctors may be still lower than the national average. The conditions of hospitals, the healthcare affordability, insurance policies in the town have to be considered as metrics before providing a straight claim about the healthcare in the town.
The author's argument is highly indefensible provided the scant analysis done on the different factors based on which the retired persons choose a . I would prefer to have more surveys from the persons on the verge of retirement or already retired, know about their preferences and the more evidence about the progressive nature of the Clearview for choosing a place before claiming such a thing.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 1978 1500
No. of Different Words: 201 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.205 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.827 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 80 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 60 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.353 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.117 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.647 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.613 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ealth advantages. However, some of those wide assumptions are flawed upto certain...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wide
...h advantages. However, some of those wide assumptions are flawed upto certain ext...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...his place after retirement. However, he didnt mention any particular features of th...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Particular
...rement. However, he didnt mention any particular features of the scenic beauty of the pl...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...s of the scenic beauty of the place and havent provided any quantitative perspective o...
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Line 17, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reased over past years in Clearview, the cost still may be higher than the other ...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Cost
...ed over past years in Clearview, the cost still may be higher than the other neig...
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Suggestion: Worried
...eople after retirement, may be little worried about the housing cost and real-estate ...
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Suggestion: Still
...e area, the per capita doctors may be still lower than the national average. The co...
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Line 33, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: still,
...e area, the per capita doctors may be still lower than the national average. The co...
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Suggestion: Providing
...ve to be considered as metrics before providing a straight claim about the healthcare i...
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Line 39, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...ut the healthcare in the town. The authors argument is highly indefensible provide...
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Line 39, column 145, Rule ID: THE_SENT_END[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'a'?
...sed on which the retired persons choose a . I would prefer to have more surveys f...
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Line 39, column 146, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed on which the retired persons choose a . I would prefer to have more surveys f...
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Line 41, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence about the progressive nature of the Clearview for choosing a place before cl...
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Line 45, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
... for choosing a place before claiming such a thing.
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Line 45, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a place before claiming such a thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2082.0 2260.96107784 92% => OK
No of words: 378.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50793650794 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91717741092 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 204.123752495 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6754857664 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 119.503703932 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 5.15768463074 330% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.25449101796 324% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259667939935 0.218282227539 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779592513114 0.0743258471296 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646996516073 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823871809924 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064192624297 0.0628817314937 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.3799401198 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.3550499002 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.197005988 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.5979740519 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 98.500998004 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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