Any business at the end of the day seeks to gain profits, be it in terms of overall profit gain (monetary), best market share & market growth of their products and services. Taking these aspects into consideration, I believe that it is beneficial for the company to give its upcoming construction project not to Alpha but to Zeta.
First of all, the primary purpose of any profit-making organization is to maximize the outputs with minimum inputs. Taking into consideration the initial costs that are incurred by the company to set up a new building, Alpha has an upper hand when compared to its counterpart Zeta, as the total estimate filed by the former one is lesser than the latter one. But this alone cannot be taken into consideration for deciding the better one for the work. When post construction costs such as maintenance and other miscellaneous expenses taken into consideration Zeta performs much better than its counterpart. However, if the company is very keen on investing less on the initial construction costs, Alpha would be a better choice.
In addition to making profits, the company needs to keep in mind how environmental-friendly its resources are. When the net energy consumption per year is to be taken into account, Zeta is a clear winner, as it has buildings that have been designed to minimize energy consumption rate despite both the construction companies having the same floor plans. Energy consumption is one of the important topics that should be present in any checklist while building any infrastructure, as the resources are limited in quantity thus need to be used judiciously.
And finally, the tenure of the workforce is also an equally important issue that needs to be dealt with while giving a contract to a particular company. As this can delay the host organization’s working and indirectly effect the turnover of the host organization. As it is mentioned in the problem statement and I quote “Zeta has a stable workforce with little employee turnover.” Zeta, having a stable workforce with a little employee turnover will be able to complete the construction of the building in the specified time-frame, thus being a better option to choose between the two.
By way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I’m of the opinion that it is beneficial for company to give the new building construction project to Zeta despite Alpha having lower initial construction costs.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- OK
argument 2 -- so which one should we choose?
argument 3 -- need to argue against zeta
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 402 350
No. of Characters: 1983 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.478 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.933 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.982 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.938 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.341 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.444 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'gain'.
Suggestion: gain
...business at the end of the day seeks to gains profits, be it in terms of overall prof...
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Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rce with little employee turnover.' Zeta, having a stable workforce with a l...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, so, thus, while, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.6327345309 117% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 2260.96107784 91% => OK
No of words: 401.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11970074813 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1349847295 2.78398813304 113% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521197007481 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 705.55239521 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2519450019 57.8364921388 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.642857143 119.503703932 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6428571429 23.324526521 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.70786347227 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13048348591 0.218282227539 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456133657672 0.0743258471296 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398843243708 0.0701772020484 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816739413646 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399431549679 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.3550499002 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 98.500998004 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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