The following appeared in a memorandum from the manager of WWAC radio station. To reverse a decline in listener numbers, our owners have decided that WWAC must change from its current rock-music format. The decline has occurred despite population growth in our listening area, but that growth has resulted mainly from people moving here after their retirement. We must make listeners of these new residents. We could switch to a music format tailored to their tastes, but a continuing decline in local sales of recorded music suggests limited interest in music. Instead we should change to a news and talk format, a form of radio that is increasingly popular in our area."
The number of listeners of WWAC radio station has declined drastically, to counter this problem the radio station thinks to change it’s current music format which is rock-music. The population of listeners has lowered even after an increase in population in the area and the radio is thinking to broadcast music tailored to the taste of these new residents who are shifting here after retirement. The sales of recorded music has taken a step back suggesting loss of interest in music therefore the radio station will be shifting to a new format that will be news and talk which is even nowadays trending.
The decrease in sales of music records and less number of people listening to WWAC radio station can be a consequence of not regularly updating the songs and sticking to old genres such as rock and metal which are currently not very popular among the youth. The population of the area is increasing due to the new residents who are retired people as they will not be inclined to listen to music that has more of hard percussions or metal instruments involved. Therefore more soothing and calm music will help in increasing the amount of listeners. According to a survey conducted by various radio stations playing the latest top songs in the noon to evening time and then slowly shifting to famous old songs in the night has proved to keep a good amount of music lovers stick to the radio channel throughout the day. The radio station should shift to playing new genre songs replacing the hard rock one and the “old is gold” playlist in the night.
The new generation is not only listening to songs on the radio but even getting adapted to consume content such as news, podcasts and talk shows. Most of the radio station nowadays try to add a flavour of funny elements in between the songs that not only keeps the interest of the listener to them but even make them aware about day to day news. WWAC radio station is shifting to news and talk format keeping in regard that is more famous in their area but completely shifting to these two formats will make radio channel monotonous for most of the people as the X factor that music provides will be lost. The radio should rather adopt a hybrid way where talk shows and news can be presented in a fun and casual way squeezed between songs. This trick is adopted by 90% of the radio stations worldwide keeping listeners sticked to a particular channel. This way the radio will be offering vast variety of entertainment to a user in multiple ways.
The decision of changing the music style and shifting to other different ways is going to raise the user metric bars high for the WWAC as music is one of the most important key factor in uplifting a users mood, if the radio can target the correct sentiments in the music genre, the listeners face will get lighten up by a smile making them love the songs and hence bringing more fame to the radio station. The talk shows can be a great medium for residents who are retired to share their life journey and whatever difficulties they have faced in their lives. This can boost the moral of a young generation individual to perform well in his work or studies to enjoy a luxurious and happy life in his 50s. Broadcasting news can help the local people get aware about local happening in the town and upcoming festive gatherings. It can even help in broadcasting the daily rates of petrol, diesel and natural gas.
This step of WWAC radio station is going to play a major role in it’s growth if implemented correctly by properly researching and understanding user sentiments and updating the fashion of playing music, news and podcasts following the trends as more of informative material or casual talk can make a user switch to another radio station. Hence a proper blend of all the ways is very important to make the radio station successful in the upcoming years.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 686 350
No. of Characters: 3145 1500
No. of Different Words: 281 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.118 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.585 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.424 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 191 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 150 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 101 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.226 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.54 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.13 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...who are shifting here after retirement. The sales of recorded music has taken a ste...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...alk which is even nowadays trending. The decrease in sales of music records and ...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ently not very popular among the youth. The population of the area is increasing du...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...cussions or metal instruments involved. Therefore more soothing and calm music will help ...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'users'' or 'user's'?
Suggestion: users'; user's
...ost important key factor in uplifting a users mood, if the radio can target the corre...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'in its growth'?
Suggestion: in its growth
...o station is going to play a major role in it’s growth if implemented correctly by properly re...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: IT_IS[18]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (=it is)?
Suggestion: its
...tation is going to play a major role in it’s growth if implemented correctly by prop...
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Line 9, column 339, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...a user switch to another radio station. Hence a proper blend of all the ways is very ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 11.1786427146 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 97.0 55.5748502994 175% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3199.0 2260.96107784 141% => OK
No of words: 686.0 441.139720559 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66326530612 5.12650576532 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.11777311996 4.56307096286 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.455453144 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 204.123752495 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419825072886 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 982.8 705.55239521 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.8473053892 140% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9658017682 57.8364921388 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.333333333 119.503703932 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 23.324526521 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38095238095 5.70786347227 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.20758483034 183% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220309214951 0.218282227539 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760602533104 0.0743258471296 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823302231073 0.0701772020484 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145740764792 0.128457276422 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603817675566 0.0628817314937 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 98.500998004 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.1389221557 133% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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