The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition
Healthy competition and cooperation is what leads an individual to the apex, regardless of the field he/she is working in. Young minds need to be made aware about how working together on cooperative basis can be advantageous. However, competition is what drives individuals to give in their best and provide peak performance. I mostly agree that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in various is by instilling a sense of cooperation in them.
In this modern era, it is believed that various minds when brought together can achieve excellence, but only if they work with the goal to be achieved in their mind and not letting it be affected by the differences among team members. Cooperation is a key aspect in order to achieve this. To be a leader of an organization or a political party means each and every individual working under the respective field is looking upto you, how you lead matters a lot. This can only happen if you are in mutual agreement with the majority and take decisions cooperatively. Competitive quality is good in a leader in order to motivate the individuals working under him/her, but it should not so much that it leads to the path of malpractices and affects the industry or government as a whole and calls its integrity into question.
Cooperation can sometimes hinder the growth of a team, for instance a person in a team working for the campaign of the upcoming election feels that they should follow a particular strategy, but the majority of the support is for another strategy and they decide on following the one with majority of votes, if such a situation happens often, people might stop putting forward their views and just go with what the majority says.
Further, no competition might also create a very neutral environment. Consider that a company wants to meet its year end deadlines and in order to achieve that, it says that whoever completes the maximum deadline will be rewarded with a promotion. If such an incentive is given, employees can have a healthy competition and can thrive to their fullest in order to gain the promotion. Alternatively, if the employees are given no incentives and are told to work together with team members, the goal might not even be achieved. Competition is thus a requirement in such cases.
The above instances show that neither cooperation nor competition alone are enough, cooperation along with balanced competition is the way in which young people will have the qualities in order to become leaders of various fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...of an organization or a political party means each and every individual working under...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'happens'.
Suggestion: often happens
... majority of votes, if such a situation happens often, people might stop putting forward thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89814814815 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83809512713 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50462962963 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.4807412384 60.3974514979 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.25 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276818375639 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930254732373 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156014486443 0.0758088955206 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163601777183 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137873330679 0.0667264976115 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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