The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of super screen movie production company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended super scree-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by the movie reviewers about specific super screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
super screen production company states that fewer people watched movies previous year with respect to any other year and though positive reviews increased, therefore budget for advertising should be increased to attract more people.
Question to be asks.
Does content of previous movies were at par with respect to current movies?
are viewers who don`t like the movies in this year also review about the movie?
Contents of this reviews are reaching to viewers.is it possible that still they are not interested to watch movie?
So, according the advertising director fewer people are attending super screen movies, but it is possible that viewers don`t like the content in previous years and finally now they are not much interested to attend the movie. because in previous years might be the content of the super screen movies was not at par.
According to memo percentage of positive reviews increase, but is there a possibility that viewers that don`t like the movie also not interested in reviewing the movie. and only people who are in support of movie review for it. hence percentage of positive review increases.
Acc to memo fewers people attended the movies, hence content is not reaching the target audience. but it can be possible that people got the reviews, but still they are not have apathy for the movie because of their personnal experience based on previous visits.
So the problem can be the quality of the content, not the lack of awareness of public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, so, still, therefore, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 2260.96107784 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 441.139720559 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13414634146 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.56307096286 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47991802086 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 204.123752495 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475609756098 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 705.55239521 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.7010421251 57.8364921388 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1538461538 119.503703932 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 23.324526521 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.70786347227 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 5.15768463074 174% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228512346858 0.218282227539 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892736214649 0.0743258471296 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066784292995 0.0701772020484 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100024051693 0.128457276422 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766351458824 0.0628817314937 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 12.3882235529 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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