It is sometimes said that borrowing money from friends can harm or damage the relationship. Do you agree? Why or why not.
Recently relationship between friends has confronted a lot of problems. There are those who say borrowing money from friends harm the relationship, while others believe the opposite. In this essay I will examine both sides and add my overall view.
People who say that borrowing money causes negative results have their own perspectives and reasons. They think borrowing money as exploitation for friendship. As well as the main reason that they think that most friends need friendship for personal purposes. For example, if someone asked his friend borrowing money and he doesn't know if he has money or no, so In this case maybe happen embarrassing attitude that can make the relationship weaker than before.
Despite of all these arguments this is matter depends on the friends themselves, if they have a good thinking toward their friends. In addition a lot relationship stand at the cooperation between friends and they deal with each other easily without any problems. For instance, some people believe broadly that asking friends for any favor help the relationship to be stronger and better. Consequently they regard each other brothers.
In conclusion, from my overall opinion I disagree with this matter from numerous reason beside it depend on the personality of friends. I think people who say that borrowing money harmful have negative view with all due respect. On my opinion I think borrowing money is a matter of giving and taking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.6327345309 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 13.6137724551 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 55.5748502994 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 2260.96107784 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 236.0 441.139720559 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16949152542 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72051058121 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.468620217663 122% => OK
syllable_count: 364.5 705.55239521 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2152615023 57.8364921388 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1428571429 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.70786347227 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206641939598 0.218282227539 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794634683478 0.0743258471296 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061334707364 0.0701772020484 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139699280587 0.128457276422 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455306884875 0.0628817314937 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.3550499002 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.197005988 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.5979740519 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 98.500998004 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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