Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using internet.
Living without laws is impossible for many people, in the same time we have myriad people who wish
they could live randomly without living up to any laws, that is why the number of atheist become
increasing at a fast pace. The conflicts and arguments between both teams will be touched on as
follows:
The audience who pursue to preserve the Constitution has many arguments and irrefutable evidences.
For instance, they assume that if we call the laws off, the persecution, murder, torture and crime will
spread unrelentingly through communities. Furthermore, the robbers will get away with any things they
want , and no one can eliminate them. Moreover, the adolescents will be easily able to hang around,
hence, break the decorum among their societies down without any censuring.
Consequently, sadness, fright, corruption, and resentments will surely reign, people will not be able to
look after their children, but even after themselves. Also, famine, inflation, poverty and contamination
will threaten the life, as a result of running out of food , water and commodities. People will not manage
to enjoy their fundamental rights such as freedom and safety.
On the other hand, people who calls for the end of laws resort to some expedients to persuade the
people into giving in to their demands of absolute liberty. In fact, they just want to have and do what
they want without paying attention to other people’s feelings and perspectives. A very good example is that they
discredit the principles and the laws through women’s right and violence into constitution and religion’s
laws. Strangely, quite a few people give in their demands without any sufficient evidence, it just a bind
imitation.
Last but not least, from my perspective, the governments should cut off those agnostic and atheist
people into a far way-deserted island , show them up in a public square and warn the people that these
people are a serious danger in our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86844402591 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4775057834 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.923076923 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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