Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Inoculations in this statement is beleived to have the potency to save lives when routinely administered in areas where disease is detected. To autenticate the claims here, first, one may need to see the statistics that backs this up. Where has Inoculations been administered before? What is the distribution/characteristics of the area in which it was administered? Is the population of the area representative of all areas? Having an answer to this statistics, will help in determining the potency of Inoculations, how effective it is, if it is effective at all, it will also help in understanding under which circumstances it is effective among others. Knowing this will either strenghten or weaken the argument.
Secondly, should the innoculations be administered after the outbreak of cow flu or before the outbreak, as the statement seem to believe it is only areas where the disease have been detected that requires Inoculations? If once affected, one cannot be cured nor treated of it, then what's the point of Inoculations after being afftected it should rather be a thing that will be given to unafected areas first before outbreak of the cow flu. If one cannot be cured after being affected, the argument is flawed on arrival about who gets or doesn't get Inoculations.
Lastly, evidence abut how Inoculations is designed to work will be needed. Is it supposed to be a one of usage or indeed a routine a usage? What side effects has Inoculations when routinely administered? Are adults more receptive routine administration and children one of administration? Finding awnsers to this enquiry about how to adminiter Inoculations will help in determing the right way to distribtre the dosage.
Overall, we cannot categorically affirm that Inoculations is potant enough to cure/treat cow flu in all areas where the disease is detected. To make any conclusions at all, answers will be needed to the above questions.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 316 350
No. of Characters: 1573 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.216 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.978 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.123 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 105 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 62 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.169 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.353 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.318 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.504 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 447, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ative of all areas? Having an answer to this statistics, will help in determining th...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...cannot be cured nor treated of it, then whats the point of Inoculations after being a...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... is flawed on arrival about who gets or doesnt get Inoculations. Lastly, evidence...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 55.5748502994 85% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 313.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19488817891 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40404203397 2.78398813304 122% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 204.123752495 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517571884984 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2744372311 57.8364921388 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6470588235 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4117647059 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.70786347227 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33789775001 0.218282227539 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113542507151 0.0743258471296 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784050337676 0.0701772020484 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214197896135 0.128457276422 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504721807125 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 98.500998004 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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