Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The passage infers a concern about the small possibility of people's death due to the inoculation process taken to control cow flu.
Since there is a possibility of people's death due to the inoculation process, there are other steps which could be taken to control epidemic like cow flu. The routine administration should rather be taken to identify the affected cows and destroy them. In this way, there won't be the necessity of inoculation process which is not fully safe. In the meantime, necessary experiments should be taken to make inoculation process safe for the people. This strengthens the argument inferred in the passage.
But if the people are already been subjected to the epidemic, then many lives might be in danger by not taking the inoculation process. Since the possibility of death due to the inoculation process is relatively very low, the process should be permitted to administer in this case to save the vast majority of the lives rather than considering the small possibility. This, on the other hand, indicates against the argument in the passage.
To conclude we can say that, depending on the situation and intensity of the epidemic, we can show evidences both in favor and against the argument.
- Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permi 33
- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discu 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of peoples death due to the inoculation process, there are other steps which cou...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h in favor and against the argument.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 28.8173652695 24% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 2260.96107784 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 204.0 441.139720559 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.56307096286 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78469342896 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 204.123752495 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 705.55239521 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 19.7664670659 51% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9801000416 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 23.324526521 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.70786347227 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2495940697 0.218282227539 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100330808879 0.0743258471296 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630067301788 0.0701772020484 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152392769031 0.128457276422 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555574428149 0.0628817314937 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.3799401198 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.32208582834 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 98.500998004 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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