All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
To run a company efficiently, it is vital to get advice from the experts who have already proved their expertise in the corresponding field. Therefore I disagree to the part that the advice of the consultants would be unnecessary if the companies only listen to their own employees.
The importance of listening to the ideas of own employees can not be ignored. But in this modern era of unlimited knowledge and new ideas being introduced continuously, it is hard to get all those necessary information always within your reach. So, it is likely that a company is very efficient in operating one particular sector but doesn't have the necessary tools within themselves in another area. However, in today's world you can't lag behind only for that reason. That's where the significance of the consultants arises.
Moreover, if the company is newly established, the probability that most of the employees are not experienced enough to bring those efficient ideas promptly is high.
Experience is one of the most vital impetus for operating a company smoothly. It can't be replaced with anything else. Thus, if a company feels the necessity to glean the knowledge from the experienced consultants who have proved their worth in this task, it should be encouraged.
Another particular significance of hiring the consultants is that the unbiased view of them which sometimes doesn't work if only rely on your own employees.
There is nothing wrong to learn from the bests. It's rather pernicious to stick to the same ideas which aren't working. It is wise to move forward putting that ego aside.
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- All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.Write a response in which you discu 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10227272727 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85101233773 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.6682191533 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290234385818 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862671670596 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740619635924 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135861372619 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809265551938 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.