From the memorandum issued by the business manager of a television station, we can infer that many people complained about the station's coverage on weather and local news. Furthermore, we can understand that the station has increased coverage on National news. Other thing is that the station has lost its local business's advertisement contract. So, the manager has suggested that the inorder to regain viewership and advertisement contracts, increase in coverage of local news and weather is required.
From the memorandum by the business manager of a television station, we can infer that many people complained about the station's coverage on weather and local news. Furthermore, we can understand that the station has increased coverage on National news. Other thing is that the station has lost its local business's advertisement contract. So, the manager has suggested that the in order to regain viewership and advertisement contracts, increase in coverage of local news and weather is required. However, before this statement is properly evaluated, there are three important question that must be answered.
First of all, is there any particular reason why the local businesses cancelled their contracts? Is it due to increase in complaints from the viewers of the station or something else? It is possible that the local businesses are in some kind of bad economic situation and thus they are unable to meet the requirements of the contract. Therefore, they needed to cancel their contracts with the station. If that is the case, then conclusion drawn in the original argument is significantly weakened.
Secondly, does adding the more coverage to local news and weather increase the viewership? Does making more specialized coverage to local news attract local business to advertise on their station?. But it is possible that the reason for reduction in viewership and advertisement contracts may be due to quality of news presented during local news and weather coverage from the station. Whether the coverage time is the actual issue or some other things, we cannot assume that increase in coverage directly correlates to more viewership. If that is the reason , then the conclusion drawn is further weakened,
Lastly, what is the integrity of the complaints received by the station? Is there any way to validate about the complaint's received? Like, from which part of the area does people complain or what is the age group of people who made the complaints? Furthermore, the authenticity of the complaints received plays a huge part. Whether the complain is received from multiple people or whether few people have made multiple complaints? If the latter is the case, then the conclusion drawn does not hold water.
In conclusion, the argument, as it stands now, is considerably flawed due to its reliance on unwarranted assumptions. If there are proper answers with evidence given for these question ( like validating the complaints received), then it will possible to fully evaluate the whether increase in local news and weather coverage will increase in viewership and attract more local business to advertise in the station.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 423 350
No. of Characters: 2165 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.535 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.118 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.772 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 159 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 107 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 57 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.391 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.282 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.652 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.532 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.113 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
From the memorandum by the business mana...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'stations'' or 'station's'?
Suggestion: stations'; station's
...r that many people complained about the stations coverage on weather and local news. Fur...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ant question that must be answered. First of all, is there any particular re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... argument is significantly weakened. Secondly, does adding the more coverage ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o more viewership. If that is the reason , then the conclusion drawn is further we...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...onclusion drawn is further weakened, Lastly, what is the integrity of the com...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nts received plays a huge part. Whether the complain is received from multiple people or whe...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...onclusion drawn does not hold water. In conclusion, the argument, as it stand...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s with evidence given for these question like validating the complaints received,...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o fully evaluate the whether increase in local news and weather coverage will inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.6327345309 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 28.8173652695 94% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 423.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27659574468 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85604151267 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442080378251 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.70958083832 221% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2405000266 57.8364921388 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.454545455 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2272727273 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 6.88822355289 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48496188707 0.218282227539 222% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151195740081 0.0743258471296 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.191220468271 0.0701772020484 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274373572848 0.128457276422 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200721355665 0.0628817314937 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.5979740519 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 98.500998004 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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