“In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town, we should encourage Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area. The Hillview landfill, which has been undeveloped for decades, is a perfect site for this plant. The building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousands of Hillview residents left unemployed after Computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year. I am asking the City Council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing.”
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The memo from the Mayor of the city of Hillview says that, in order to address the unemployment problem in the City, the Autotech company needs to be encourage to build their automobile manufacturing plant in the area. The reason stated in the memo for this decision is, because the Hillview landfill will be the perfect place for setting up the facility and it will also provide employment to the people of the city. Before proceeding with the solutions to attract the company, following questions need to be answered.
Are the unemployed residents of the Hillview ready to work for Autotech? Do these people have adequate competance? There is a possibility that the unemployed residents in the area are skilled to perform tasks that are useful in a computer software programming company and don't have much skills to do a job in a automobile manufacturing plant. It is also possible that these residents are not interested to work for a company. They might be thinking of starting their own business or relocating to nearby city for job. Therefore, until these questions are answered it is not possible to go ahead with the recommendation.
Furthermore, is the site for manufacturing plant is really an ideal location? There is a possibility that the requirements for setting up the manufacturing plant are totally different. The area mentioned is underdeveloped. It is possible that few developments are required to set up the plant such as availability of wifi and proper mobile connectivity, availability of road connectivity, electricity. The major raw material used in various manufacturing processes is water. Is it thoroughly evaluated if this is available in large quantity nearby? In case if all these problems come up then it is not wise to implement the recommendations stated.
In order to analyze if it is wise to go ahead with the recommendations, it is necessary to get answer for above questions. The answers can be provided in the form of survey report from independant aganecy. In absence of these questions, the recommendation as it is does not hold water.role in the increased violence.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 350 350
No. of Characters: 1727 1500
No. of Different Words: 168 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.325 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.934 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.123 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 79 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.421 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.805 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.421 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.278 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.469 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.042 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'building'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: building
... Autotech company needs to be encourage to build their automobile manufacturing plant in...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...mputer software programming company and dont have much skills to do a job in a autom...
^^^^
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...tware programming company and dont have much skills to do a job in a automobile manu...
^^^^
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd dont have much skills to do a job in a automobile manufacturing plant. It is a...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.6327345309 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 2260.96107784 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 441.139720559 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07163323782 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21023314327 2.78398813304 115% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507163323782 0.468620217663 108% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.0716668169 57.8364921388 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1578947368 119.503703932 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36842105263 5.70786347227 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267920581371 0.218282227539 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755168180272 0.0743258471296 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798918538146 0.0701772020484 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149288718057 0.128457276422 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747343849745 0.0628817314937 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.3799401198 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.5979740519 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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