"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels."
Since there is no dependency of shoppers and skateboarding enthusiasts, one cannot solely blame the increase in skateboarding popularity with decrease in shoppers.There are many other factors which can be taken into consideration while analysing the fact of significant decrease in the sales of Central plaza.
There is possibility where people have stopped shopping at a rate compared to previous year because of high product prices offered by the Central Plaza. On the other hand, the products available there might not be reliable as compared to products available at other shops.Also, there is no credibility on the survey conducted which shows that sales have fallen than before.One another fact which is not illuminated here is about the skateboarding facility that in which year did it came in the Plaza and what were the profit levels of previous years of Plaza shops.There is a possibility that the level of profits were declining every year even before the skateboarding amenities came into Plaza.
The fact that littering and vandalism is due to skateboarding is also doubtful. There can be a group of people which are not associated with skateboarding and littering both. Simply prohibiting the skateboarding won't stop littering. Instead stricter rules should be implemented. To stop such behavior of public, CCTV cameras should be installed and guards should be appointed. Charging penalty while littering can also help to attenuate such behavior.Proper management of waste shoud also be done by placing dustbins.
Prohibiting skateboarding will also not help in bringing back the high profit percentage of Plaza. Instead the services provided by the Plaza should be improved to attract more people.Advertising for new products and attractive offers can highlight the shops of Plaza in peoples' eyes.Staff should be more helpful towards the shoppers to build a trust towards their product.
Lastly,no conclusion can be drawn to prohibit the skateboarding on partial information which speaks only about the decreasing profits in last 2 years.Detailed analysis and survey of Plaza stores can actually offer help in determining the reason behind the decline of Central Plaza sales.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 352 350
No. of Characters: 1823 1500
No. of Different Words: 178 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.331 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.179 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.811 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 75 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.077 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.428 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.114 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, lastly, so, thus, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 28.8173652695 21% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 55.5748502994 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 2260.96107784 82% => OK
No of words: 342.0 441.139720559 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44736842105 5.12650576532 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1023998098 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 204.123752495 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.468620217663 111% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.126207994 57.8364921388 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.25 119.503703932 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 23.324526521 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216099559414 0.218282227539 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080496532227 0.0743258471296 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07800637692 0.0701772020484 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144244808105 0.128457276422 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822741279153 0.0628817314937 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 14.3799401198 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 48.3550499002 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.197005988 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.5979740519 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 98.500998004 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 12.3882235529 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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