People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

The two important elements of humans are brain and heart. Both of these play a vital role -in survival and leading life. An individual's life is all about the decisions they make. All the good, the bad is in an individuals hand. Decisions carve a niche in one's life. There are two kinds of people , one who take decisions by heart, and one by brain. Decisions by heart in layman terms means taking decisions only considering emotions and not having any considerations of Logic, analyzing the whole thing without looking the positive and negative aspect , right or wrong. The author believes that people who taken decision based on emotion and justify those decision with logic are poor decision makers and there is no doubt to it.

It is completely fair to take decisions from heart only or from mind only, however standing strong by your decision is perhaps the most important thing. There can be a situations where a person is maybe emotionally attached that they wouldn't want to consider any logical aspects and probably it may not have any role to play. But there can be situations when a person cannot decide between mind and heart and goes with what the heart says. In such scenarios, there are only two possible outcomes: either you are very sure of your decision and are very affirmative about it or it turns out wrong and you regret.

A bad decision is certainly bound to have its repercussions and one must be prepared to face it rather than covering up and unnecessarily justifying or defending with self made logics. These are not only poor decision makers but also poor learners. 'To err is humane' as the saying goes but it is vital to learn from the mistake. If one illogically keeps defending themselves just to maintain their impression or not to be looked down upon are not growing in life in the right way. They are bound to repeat the same mistakes again and again and repent

To sum up, I strongly agree with author that way of taking decisions and justifying later does is incoherent. This way of dealing can be detrimental to individuals personally and professionally as well as the consequences may have to be borne by the other people or institutes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Suggestion:
...l about the decisions they make. All the good, the bad is in an individuals hand....
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...iduals hand. Decisions carve a niche in ones life. There are two kinds of people , o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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...looking the positive and negative aspect , right or wrong. The author believes tha...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a situation' or simply 'situations'?
Suggestion: a situation; situations
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, no doubt, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.6327345309 127% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 11.1786427146 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 16.3942115768 6% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 381.0 441.139720559 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71916010499 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59621682677 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 204.123752495 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527559055118 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 705.55239521 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0553391752 57.8364921388 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.70786347227 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425025862557 0.218282227539 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133329450479 0.0743258471296 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166773735116 0.0701772020484 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241770954032 0.128457276422 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152852816412 0.0628817314937 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.3799401198 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.5979740519 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.32208582834 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 98.500998004 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, no doubt, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments