Here it is suggested that Pirouettes ballet school is most obvious choice for any child,as it is has most intensive program in all dance schools in Elmtown. They did not mentioned that it is obvious choice for those love dance,So how can any child love dance, How can any child love to teach from most intensive program of dance. Its totally depend on whether child really interesting in dance school or not.There are many other carrier option for any child.
Even if child love to dance it is not always necessary that most intensive program suite any child who take admission in Pirourttes Ballet school.Every child has different perception at looking things and different understanding level. No can give sure assurance that this program can suite to that child. Some time most mild program can prove best program for child.It is not always necessary that child who learn in prestigious institute can be best qualities.Some time even less attractive school can give birth to most enlighten student. Its all depend on will to learn, not on from which school to learn.
Here also mentioned that teacher of Pirouettes Ballet school danced in most prestigious companies.But is working in prestigious company really make a teacher great ? Obviously no.It is always true that experince make man perfect and prone to less mistakes.But what make teacher great is ability to understand child and most them self according to child behavious so that they can interact with them in there language. But if both combinationation work undoubtely it is best combination of teacher in world.
It might be possible that good institute have higher rate of success but but not always for every student. Though writer mentioned that many of student from Pirouettes ballet school have gone to become professional dancer with top dance companies.But he really did not mentioned about student qualities.It might be possiblity that Pirouettes ballet school have good contact with top companies.Here it moght be possiblities that there are huge amount of opportunies available in this sector thats why many of student have going to work with top companies. But this does not make sense that other institute can not provide good carrier opportunities.
From all above,It is clearly inferred that. No one can decide any perticular school can be prooven to most elight to any student who takes admission in that school. It is clearly eliminated that someone choose such prestious institue for child without analysing his child intrest and his way to work with instiute.Rather analysing which institute best among all.It is always good to analyse child and then to choose which institute is good for child.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Obviously no.It is always true that experince make man perfect and prone to less mistakes.But what make teacher great is ability to understand child and most them self according to child behavious so that they can interact with them in there language.
Error: behavious Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: experince Suggestion: experience
Sentence: But if both combinationation work undoubtely it is best combination of teacher in world.
Error: undoubtely Suggestion: undoubtedly
Error: combinationation Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Though writer mentioned that many of student from Pirouettes ballet school have gone to become professional dancer with top dance companies.But he really did not mentioned about student qualities.It might be possiblity that Pirouettes ballet school have good contact with top companies.Here it moght be possiblities that there are huge amount of opportunies available in this sector thats why many of student have going to work with top companies.
Error: possiblities Suggestion: possibilities
Error: moght Suggestion: might
Error: opportunies Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: possiblity Suggestion: possibility
Sentence: No one can decide any perticular school can be prooven to most elight to any student who takes admission in that school.
Error: elight Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: prooven Suggestion: proven
Error: perticular Suggestion: particular
Sentence: It is clearly eliminated that someone choose such prestious institue for child without analysing his child intrest and his way to work with instiute.Rather analysing which institute best among all.It is always good to analyse child and then to choose which institute is good for child.
Error: instiute Suggestion: institute
Error: intrest Suggestion: interest
Error: prestious Suggestion: previous
Error: analysing Suggestion: analyzing
Error: institue Suggestion: institute
Error: analyse Suggestion: analyst
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 17 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 454 350
No. of Characters: 2203 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.616 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.852 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.481 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.375 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.178 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.374 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.605 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.144 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...ool is most obvious choice for any child,as it is has most intensive program in all...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
... dance schools in Elmtown. They did not mentioned that it is obvious choice for those lov...
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Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , So
...t is obvious choice for those love dance,So how can any child love dance, How can a...
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Line 1, column 331, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...h from most intensive program of dance. Its totally depend on whether child really ...
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Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...ally interesting in dance school or not.There are many other carrier option for any c...
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Line 1, column 460, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...any other carrier option for any child. Even if child love to dance it is not always ne...
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Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Every
...e admission in Pirourttes Ballet school.Every child has different perception at looki...
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Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'gives'.
Suggestion: gives
...d different understanding level. No can give sure assurance that this program can su...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...rogram can prove best program for child.It is not always necessary that child who ...
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Line 2, column 445, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
... who learn in prestigious institute can be best qualities.Some time even less attractiv...
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Line 2, column 463, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Some
...tigious institute can be best qualities.Some time even less attractive school can gi...
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Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...n give birth to most enlighten student. Its all depend on will to learn, not on fro...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ol danced in most prestigious companies.But is working in prestigious company reall...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...lly make a teacher great ? Obviously no.It is always true that experince make man ...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun mistakes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...experince make man perfect and prone to less mistakes.But what make teacher great is...
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Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... man perfect and prone to less mistakes.But what make teacher great is ability to u...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...an interact with them in there language.But if both combinationation work undoubtel...
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Line 3, column 466, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...oth combinationation work undoubtely it is best combination of teacher in world. It m...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: but
...d institute have higher rate of success but but not always for every student. Though wr...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s but but not always for every student. Though writer mentioned that many of student f...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...ssional dancer with top dance companies.But he really did not mentioned about stude...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'mention'
Suggestion: mention
...p dance companies.But he really did not mentioned about student qualities.It might be pos...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...d not mentioned about student qualities.It might be possiblity that Pirouettes bal...
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Line 4, column 394, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Here
...ol have good contact with top companies.Here it moght be possiblities that there are...
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Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ght be possiblities that there are huge amount of opportunies available in this sector...
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Line 4, column 491, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...of opportunies available in this sector thats why many of student have going to work ...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , It
...carrier opportunities. From all above,It is clearly inferred that.No one can dec...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...m all above,It is clearly inferred that.No one can decide any perticular school ca...
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Line 5, column 165, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...dent who takes admission in that school.It is clearly eliminated that someone choo...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Rather
...trest and his way to work with instiute.Rather analysing which institute best among al...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...trest and his way to work with instiute.Rather analysing which institute best among al...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...nalysing which institute best among all.It is always good to analyse child and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 28.8173652695 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2248.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 436.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15596330275 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74676762598 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451834862385 0.468620217663 96% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.8473053892 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.573504617 57.8364921388 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.923076923 119.503703932 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5384615385 23.324526521 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 5.70786347227 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.25449101796 609% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.430169432009 0.218282227539 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176627012058 0.0743258471296 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142492769631 0.0701772020484 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246667168822 0.128457276422 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744495859475 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 98.500998004 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.1389221557 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.