To become a leader what is neccesary? to be cooperative or competative. It is question of everyones choice.But what really matter in good leadership? Good connection with society and it can only gain by cooperation than competition.
It is well said that; to improve yourself you should compete with yourself rather than with your opponent. It might be possible that you alredy surpassed all good qualities of your opponent and if still your competing with them that indirectly mean you are not giving justice to your developement. If you do better than before, People will always notice it. Because as you do good thing, Peoples expectation from you, Star increasing and to satisfy all expectation you should compete with yourself.
If you are behaving in cooperative way and taking all social aspect in mind. Like taking suggestions and consideration from society then, You will develope a strong bond with society.For example while competing with other if you forget basic needs of society then whatever work you are doing in oerder to compete your opponent will not impact more as you are not considering some basic need rather your are just competing with your opponent.
Good cooperation skill can build very good rapo with your team and as always team work have more strengh. Cooperative nature of leader lead to good and basic developent of country.Best example of cooperative Vs copetative stills is North korean leader.As he always trying to compete with leaders of other countries and during this he is obeviosly loosing trust of peoples from his own countries. On other hand countries like Europian nations are being cooperative with each other and as we know they are standing best among all other countries.
However, competative nature is must needed in some case. During period of election if leaders will not be competative for his previosu work then people might ignore whatever he or she did in past year.Here competative does not mean do things in opposite to easy other rather describe your work in contrast with other leader so than people can well understand who did best work throught the period. Obeviosly here they are using competative behaviour in order to wake up people and tell them I am best, But not in order to do developement work against each other. Sectoral competitions like in sport and science will always benefit society.
Again being cooperative will give more benefit to leader. But every leader should understand how to be competative if needed.This mean every leader should consist both skill set but they should also know where they can impart this skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 432.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06018518519 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65008589425 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490740740741 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.7087754944 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.052631579 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7368421053 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138905841719 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473868880009 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441341996687 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075804292468 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499535758881 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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