Recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen into the habitat of the Madagascan shrimp have led to a significant reduction in the species population. With the breeding season fast approaching, the number of shrimp should soon begin to increase. Nonetheless, the population should not return to the levels before the fishing boats arrived. Because this trend is expected to continue over the next several years, the Madagascan shrimp will quickly become an endangered species.
Overuse of any natural resource leads to its extinction. According to me, deep sea fishermen just perform such incursions in order to suffice the increasing demands and also to meet their own personal greed. Shrimps are just another factor to suffice such needs. Not only it causes harm to such species but also tends to destroy the entire sea ecosystem.
Deep sea fishermen, instead of attacking all such shrimp just in a single go, can also perform seasonally fishing and just give enough time intervals for the shrimps to double their populations which could then maintain the perfect balance between them. Also some restrictions should be posted on such fishermen who try to perform such incursions by the state governmental bodies. Such areas of fishing should only be open before the breeding season so that sea ecosystem have enough time and population to give rise to the new one's.
One of the factor which catalyses such process is the ever increasing population and increasing needs of the society. Instead of being completely dependent on such sea foods, coastal people need to divert their diet which includes much of the sea fishes which are easily obtainable and also are present in abundance. Also country's exports are a major factor which contribute to such issues.
Humans must understand the importance of such Madagascan shrimps and also try to protect them instead of consuming them in abundance. Such shrimps once endangered might not even be able to make it over the next few years. Also fishermen must perform incursions only on a limited scale and before breeding season as to protect such species from extinction.
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Essay evaluation report
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 272 350
No. of Characters: 1349 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.061 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.96 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.505 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 99 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 42 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.923 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.836 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.353 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...tural resource leads to its extinction. According to me, deep sea fishermen just perform such i...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ntain the perfect balance between them. Also some restrictions should be posted on s...
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Line 9, column 318, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...able and also are present in abundance. Also countrys exports are a major factor whi...
^^^^
Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ble to make it over the next few years. Also fishermen must perform incursions only ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 55.5748502994 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 272.0 441.139720559 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08088235294 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.56307096286 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54513750385 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544117647059 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 705.55239521 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3250135811 57.8364921388 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.307692308 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.70786347227 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158839670216 0.218282227539 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645545537289 0.0743258471296 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448994782052 0.0701772020484 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108412790974 0.128457276422 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536569803407 0.0628817314937 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 98.500998004 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.