Recent incursions by deep-sea fishermen into the habitat of the Madagascan shrimp have led to a significant reduction in the species population. With the breeding season fast approaching, the number of shrimp should soon begin to increase. Nonetheless, the population should not return to the levels before the fishing boats arrived. Because this trend is expected to continue over the next several years, the Madagascan shrimp will quickly become an endangered species.
The above argument wants to explain the importance of the diversity of species. here, he discusses that the intrusion of fishermen into the population of the madagascan shrimps has led to their decrease in number significantly.
The point presented by the argument is not applicable over here as we know most of the people in the world are non-vegetarians and a survey in 2012 has shown that many 80 percent of non-veg eating individuals consume chicken daily and the earth is not even close to making the species endangered. In fact, humans have started farming them, as per a report depicted by National Geograpic it has proved that the chicken has increased in their number.
Furthermore, 95 percent of the population of japan eats fish which has also led to the fish farms and it is also one of the main occupation for many individuals in the country and each individual is working on a different type of fish as everyone has a high demand in the market.
On the other hand, Lions, Tigers are getting extinct as these are the species which have comparatively less demand and are hard to keep in an area without having highly skilled personel.
Moreover, this can be taken as men and women grow whatever they need, So as the given statement says that the fishermen's invasion into has led to drastic fall in fishes, it is understood that their consumption rate is high, which means that the market demand is high, due to which their is a high probability that the farming of madagascan shrimps can take place.
In a nutshell, extencion of a species depend upon the demand of that species. And what type of investment is it.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Out of topic.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 286 350
No. of Characters: 1315 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.112 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.598 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.632 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.906 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.4 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.848 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...importance of the diversity of species. here, he discusses that the intrusion of fis...
^^^^
Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...the market demand is high, due to which their is a high probability that the farming ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.9520958084 23% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 2260.96107784 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 286.0 441.139720559 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73776223776 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.56307096286 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68083332725 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 705.55239521 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 19.7664670659 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.8473053892 136% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.846266343 57.8364921388 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.555555556 119.503703932 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 23.324526521 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.70786347227 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150242966596 0.218282227539 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610426791314 0.0743258471296 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722952133026 0.0701772020484 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748246566722 0.128457276422 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559813031489 0.0628817314937 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.3799401198 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.3550499002 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.5979740519 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 98.500998004 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 12.3882235529 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.1389221557 129% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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