“The Smith Corporation should not be permitted to develop the land that is now part of the Youngtown Wildlife Preserve. This sanctuary is essential to the survival of the 300 bird species that live in our area. Although only a small percentage of the land will be sold to Smith, the proposed development will have disastrous consequences for our area. The company plans to build a small hotel on the land. Although they have promised to ensure the preservation of the sanctuary, there is no way that their plans will do anything but harm the sanctuary. There are no circumstances under which this sale will benefit our community, which relies on tourists who visit primarily to see our magnificent bird population.”
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The environmental protection group's petition has many unwarrented assumption which may leads to complete fall of their conclusion they drawn out.
The petition states taht despite The Smith Corporation is using small land to built hotel, it will bring disastrous consequences for their area. But, detrimental effect on Youngtown area and harm to Wildlife sancuary is not same thing. This is loophole can breakdown their argument of preserving bird species.
Even if they ment both are same thing, clarification regarding development of very small area despite ensuring sencuary preservation harming bird sentuary is not given. If building hotel required to cut tree, it may strengthen environmental group argument. However, not providing elaboration can also means that that small area may be arren and without any tree which may not bring an deleratious consewuences on bird sentuary.
Finally, The Smith Corporation is building hotel for tourist who will visit bird park to see diffenr species of birds. As a result, employment and business opportunity will increases which completely invalidate petition arguement of "there are no circumstances...this sale will benefit our community". Also, if this is true, tourist population may lead to better preservation of Youngtown Wildlife santuary beacause higher tourist means more income. This money can used to protect birds. If this is the case, petition first question on survival of bird falls appart.
In conclusion, to support and strenghen arguement, certain assumption need to clarify which may have better influence on residence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 302, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...ver, not providing elaboration can also means that that small area may be arren and w...
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Line 9, column 383, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd without any tree which may not bring an deleratious consewuences on bird sentua...
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Line 13, column 174, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...mployment and business opportunity will increases which completely invalidate petition ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 55.5748502994 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 2260.96107784 61% => OK
No of words: 242.0 441.139720559 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68181818182 5.12650576532 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.56307096286 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10747373375 2.78398813304 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640495867769 0.468620217663 137% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 705.55239521 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7327819035 57.8364921388 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.769230769 119.503703932 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 23.324526521 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186991901332 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648193576876 0.0743258471296 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413860630062 0.0701772020484 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862721726917 0.128457276422 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741884470432 0.0628817314937 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.5979740519 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.32208582834 114% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 98.500998004 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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