SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville doesnot prove that Corporateville is superior place to live than Middlesburg. The sugre in number of home owners may be because of few reasons such as lower taxes, SuperCorp shifted its headquatres to Corporateville and that doesnot makes Corporateville is a superior place to live. The distance between Corporateville and Middlesburg is nowhere taken into consideration and there is a possbility that distance between Middlesburg and Corporateville is too far and employees of Corporateville felt not to travel such long distance everyday for work and this could be one of the reasons along with the lower tax for surge in the number of homowners in Corporateville.
According to the survey of the employees, few employee expressed their feelings not to live in areas such as Middlesburg which is predominately urban area and not to forget SuperCorp took a decision to change its headquaters to Corporateville without considering anyother factors such as the the living conditions and the basic facilities available in Corporateville.
Nowhere in the argument is mentioned that Middlesburg is unsafe to work and that makes Middlesburg is also safer place to work.
Ultimately Supercorp made its decision to move its headwuaters to Corporateville to Middlesburg and this is not best decision since it lacks enough evidences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orateville is a superior place to live. The distance between Corporateville and Mid...
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Line 1, column 595, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e felt not to travel such long distance everyday for work and this could be one of the r...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ut considering anyother factors such as the the living conditions and the basic facilit...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ut considering anyother factors such as the the living conditions and the basic facilit...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the best'.
Suggestion: not the best
...rporateville to Middlesburg and this is not best decision since it lacks enough evidence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 2260.96107784 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39449541284 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43738402793 2.78398813304 123% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 204.123752495 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490825688073 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 705.55239521 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59920159681 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.472613612 57.8364921388 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.0 119.503703932 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 23.324526521 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.25449101796 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.43949949677 0.218282227539 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240680356949 0.0743258471296 324% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161754674999 0.0701772020484 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213664200465 0.128457276422 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130336295503 0.0628817314937 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 14.3799401198 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 48.3550499002 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.197005988 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.5979740519 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 98.500998004 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 12.3882235529 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.9071856287 168% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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