SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's original headquarters. Moreover, Middlesburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
The following unwarranted assumption can state that SuperCorp has not made a clear decision in moving it's headquarters to Corporateville. Moving the entire headquarters to Corporateville can turn Corporateville in the near future to an urban area with more population and other associated organisations and stores to satisfy human needs.
The argument has mentioned Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg. Middlesburg being an urbanized area continue to develop and expand with the taxes being paid by the population through which the city would be able to cater to the needs of the population by having all the necessary organization, better infrastructure around. However, people may not need to travel to any other part of the province for any services or we can say the services are all around them.
Living in a city which is more urbanized like Middlesburg tends to increase the the amount of money they earn a month. The higher the cost of living the more th payscale. Thus the population may get sufficient to pay taxex, spend for a month and a decent savings as well. Moving to a less urbanized city like Corporateville may tend to reduce the amount they earn a month. Therefore, after paying taxes and all monthly expenses the final savings would be the same in both cities but with an excepton that Middlesburg may have all the necessary services around which the population can avail without having to travel around.
The argument has not clearly provided the percentage increase in the number of homeowners in Corporateville, whether the city is organized and is capable of accomodating the newly added population from Middlesburg. Being a non urbanized city it may seem to be difficult for the people to do the initial set up.
Therefore, the unwarrented assumptions makes it clear that moving a organisation like SuperCorp to a less urbanized city like Corporateville is going to have negative impacts and not the best decision made by SuperCorp.
Comments
Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- not OK
argument 3 -- not OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 325 350
No. of Characters: 1624 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.246 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.997 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.016 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 78 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 65 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.992 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.636 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.086 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ized like Middlesburg tends to increase the the amount of money they earn a month. The ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ized like Middlesburg tends to increase the the amount of money they earn a month. The ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...he cost of living the more th payscale. Thus the population may get sufficient to pa...
^^^^
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... assumptions makes it clear that moving a organisation like SuperCorp to a less u...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 28.8173652695 35% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 55.5748502994 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 325.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10153846154 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07851651048 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483076923077 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 705.55239521 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7663948352 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.538461538 119.503703932 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69230769231 5.70786347227 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161215518321 0.218282227539 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710848597925 0.0743258471296 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064354508236 0.0701772020484 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107253749194 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600774658622 0.0628817314937 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.3799401198 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.3550499002 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.197005988 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 12.3882235529 129% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.