SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Middleburg is a predominately urban area and according to an employee survey, SuperCorp has determined that its workers prefer to live in an area that is not urban. Finally, Corporateville has lower taxes than Middlesburg, making it not only a safer place to work but also a cheaper one. Therefore, Supercorp clearly made the best decision.
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on the assumptions and what the implications are if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
At first glance, the argument seems to be justified and relevant but if we take another look then there are some serious flaws in the argument, rendering to assume that the conculsion is unwarranted. The whole argument is based on assuming why Corporateville is best and safe place to live and concluded that Supercorp clearly made the right decision. But one questions arises, that how being not urban and having lower taxes make a place safe The argument would have been more justified if the author would have given more evidence regarding the Corporateville's safety measures.
Firstly, we don't have any clue about how the safety department of Corporateville works in order to say that the place is safe. If the taxes are low, then it might be possible that the already the residents of Corporateville have lower pay than Middlesburg and that's the reason it has such a low range of taxes and this situation leads to think if that place is even safe to livw and work because with such a low salaries, people might not be able to fulfill their desires like to buy a BMW or SUV, rendering them to the side of stealing things so that they can meet their wanton.
However, recent surge in the number of hometowns does not make a place superior. There must be numerous reasons behind why people suddenly move to that place.The author should have mentioned the reason behind why people left their current cities to move Corporateville. It might be possible that their current city was facing some issues related to water or the lands in Corporateville were so cheap at one time that numerous people decided to buy them and moved to new place.There is no such clue, and hence it makes the argument weaker because if that's the case then being lower in taxes does not matter in this case.
Furthermore, SuperCorp moved its headquarters to Corporateville, there might be so many reasons regarding that. Like: the number of employees working with them suddenly increases so that they had to shift to a place with more space leads to gratuitous the given argument.
Overall, the argument lacks certain evidence which makes it debatable and hampers the validity of the conclusion that the decision made by the SuperCorp was right.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd concluded that Supercorp clearly made the right decision. But one questions ar...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'regarding', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218673218673 0.25644967241 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.19656019656 0.15541462614 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0884520884521 0.0836205057962 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0515970515971 0.0520304965353 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.041769041769 0.0272364105082 153% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100737100737 0.125424944231 80% => OK
Participles: 0.046683046683 0.0416121511921 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63063090658 2.79052419416 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.044226044226 0.026700313972 166% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105651105651 0.113004496875 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.022113022113 0.0255425247493 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017199017199 0.0127820249294 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2222.0 2731.13054187 81% => OK
No of words: 383.0 446.07635468 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80156657963 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.57801047555 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279373368146 0.378187486979 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21409921671 0.287650121315 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161879895561 0.208842608468 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107049608355 0.135150697306 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63063090658 2.79052419416 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 207.018472906 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503916449086 0.469332199767 107% => OK
Word variations: 54.5423398554 52.1807786196 105% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.039408867 55% => OK
Sentence length: 34.8181818182 23.2022227129 150% => OK
Sentence length SD: 104.285685174 57.7814097925 180% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 202.0 141.986410481 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8181818182 23.2022227129 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.724660767414 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.58251231527 279% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.2281034892 51.9672348444 108% => OK
Elegance: 1.26271186441 1.8405768891 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485494545435 0.441005458295 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13786307692 0.135418324435 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.051121920111 0.0829849096947 62% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.696850719862 0.58762219726 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173899677293 0.147661913831 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247367279284 0.193483328276 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536983988536 0.0970749176394 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.371378998246 0.42659136922 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.126910290992 0.0774707102158 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322649472106 0.312017818177 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442252312787 0.0698173142475 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.33743842365 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.82389162562 71% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.