In surveys Mason city residents rank water sports (swimming, boating, fising) among their favorite recreational activities. The mason river flowing through this city is rarely used for these pursuits, however and the city devotes less of its budget to maintaining the recreational facilities
For years there have been complaints from residence about the quality of the river’s water and the river’s smell. In response, the state has recently announced plans to clean up Mason river. Use of the river for water sports is therefore sure to increase. The city government should for that reason devote more money in this year’s budget to riverside recreational facilities.
The stated assumption is that the river water for sport is sure to increase since the state has declared to clean up the Mason River and according to surveys Mason City residents like to play water games. But they do not do it much now because the water and the environment of the river is not good as the city park department devotes a small sanction for it in the budget. But now as the state government is taking it seriously, the city government can increase their budget for recreational activities in the river so that people can use their times more in the river.
The assumption is very unlikely to be proved unwarranted because the first sentence of the passage already mentioned that in surveys the people of the city has showed their interests on water sportrs. So, certainly it will increase if there is development of the river. And accordingly it would be indeed a very good plan for the city government to allocate more money for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 28.8173652695 45% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 55.5748502994 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 2260.96107784 35% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 441.139720559 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61176470588 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.56307096286 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54316371099 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 204.123752495 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517647058824 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 705.55239521 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.8473053892 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.996794773 57.8364921388 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.666666667 119.503703932 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 23.324526521 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.70786347227 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 5.15768463074 39% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332864016306 0.218282227539 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155071082238 0.0743258471296 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074150961057 0.0701772020484 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254620020583 0.128457276422 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806134074735 0.0628817314937 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.3550499002 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.5979740519 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 98.500998004 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.1389221557 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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