The author here argues that the woven baskets which is thought to be uniquely Palean is not Palean actually. Stated in this way, the author fails to mention several key factors on the basis of which it could be evaluated. On a support of this argument,the author notes that, archaeologist have discovered such a woven baskets in Lithos,an ancient village across the brim river which is board and deep and could be crossed using boats only but no Palean boats are found in Lithos. On the basis of this evidence, the author claims that the woven baskets are not uniquely Palean. However, a careful scrutiny of the evidence reveals that it provides only a little credible support to authors recommendation. Hence, the argument is incomplete.
First of fall, the author here readily assumes that the woven baskets are not uniquely Palean because it has been found in Lithos too. The author should cite various evidence to support this claim. He should made the picture that compares the pattern of these two baskets that will demonstrate the similarities between them.Based on these pictures,if the woven baskets are indeed very similar ,then it will bolster the argument otherwise will undermine it.
Moreover,the author needs to clarify whether crossing the brim river by boat is the only way to go to the lithos. There may be other alternative routes too to go to Lithos from Palea. Also, in the winter when the brim river is small, may be the people could easily cross the river without using boats. If it happens so, then, it will enervate the authors argument.
Furthermore,if there are other alternatives routes for palea people to go to lithos, the author must now provide statistics data that indicate the origin of people in lithos. The data could then be used to show that no one from Palea have ever visited the lithos. Depending in the results of this statistics, the authors argument could be supported or undermined.
To sum up,in order to evaluate the argument, the author should ensure several assumption;picture comparing the patterns of the two baskets,whether crossing brim river is only alternative to go to lithos and statistics data that indicate the origin of people in lithos. Therefore, in its present form, the given argument is flawed and unconvincing due to the lack of adequate evidence in the support of this claim.
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Essay evaluation report
argument 1 -- not OK
argument 2 -- OK
argument 3 -- not exactly
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 403 350
No. of Characters: 1902 1500
No. of Different Words: 175 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.48 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.72 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.393 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.389 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.324 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.347 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.52 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...evaluated. On a support of this argument,the author notes that, archaeologist have d...
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...iscovered such a woven baskets in Lithos,an ancient village across the brim river w...
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Suggestion: Based
...monstrate the similarities between them.Based on these pictures,if the woven baskets ...
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...ies between them.Based on these pictures,if the woven baskets are indeed very simil...
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...he woven baskets are indeed very similar ,then it will bolster the argument otherw...
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...therwise will undermine it. Moreover,the author needs to clarify whether crossin...
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...ter when the brim river is small, may be the people could easily cross the river ...
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...out using boats. If it happens so, then, it will enervate the authors argument. ...
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Line 4, column 350, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...happens so, then, it will enervate the authors argument. Furthermore,if there are o...
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...ate the authors argument. Furthermore,if there are other alternatives routes fo...
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...e,if there are other alternatives routes for palea people to go to lithos, the au...
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...that no one from Palea have ever visited the lithos. Depending in the results of ...
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Line 6, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
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Suggestion: these
...the lithos. Depending in the results of this statistics, the authors argument could ...
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Line 6, column 316, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
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... in the results of this statistics, the authors argument could be supported or undermin...
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...be supported or undermined. To sum up,in order to evaluate the argument, the aut...
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Line 8, column 71, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun assumption seems to be countable; consider using: 'several assumptions'.
Suggestion: several assumptions
... the argument, the author should ensure several assumption;picture comparing the patterns of the t...
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...omparing the patterns of the two baskets,whether crossing brim river is only alternative...
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... is only alternative to go to lithos and statistics data that indicate the origin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 28.8173652695 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 2260.96107784 87% => OK
No of words: 394.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97208121827 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67314796914 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467005076142 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 705.55239521 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1503748277 57.8364921388 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.833333333 119.503703932 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.70786347227 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.25449101796 343% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1496648975 0.218282227539 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498311914354 0.0743258471296 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534656570266 0.0701772020484 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828216789805 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503902735655 0.0628817314937 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.3799401198 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 98.500998004 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.