Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The archaeologist department search ancient things, buildings, and vestiges to analyze the age and culture of that particular place or things. History is also important of present and future. In the give argument the woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the prehistoric village of Palean. Recently, however, archaeologist discovered such basket in Lithos an ancient village across the Brim River. Only by finding a basket at another place did not mean that the basket was not uniquely Palean. Furthermore I am discussing about evidences that help to understand the argument better.
However, in the argument author only said that the basket firstly found in Palean village than Lithos village, which indicate that the basket belongs to Palean, because the pattern found on the basket was found in the immediate vicinity of the Palean village. For example, as books related to Hindi found in India abundantly, so Hindi is language practice by Indians. Similarly, Hindi books found in other country do not mean that Hindi language belongs to them.
Furthermore, due to natural calamities the rivers and mountains change their shapes and sizes. It may be plausible that the Brim River was narrow in ancient time and Palean's cross the river easily and went to Lithos. In summers the water level of so many rivers decrease and people cross the river easily and went to another villages to discourse with other peoples and learn from their culture. So, it is clearly seen that the Palean baskets were uniquely Palean.
Additionally, In the ancient time people use barratry system for trade and may be Palean carried their goods in basket and went for trade towards Lithos. During barratry system some people share their basket also and the baskets found in Lithos village. The basket may found at so many places at same time does not mean that the basket is not belong to particular place.
Finally, it is found that the Basket may be belong to Palean village. The aforementioned arguments forced to conclude that the basket may be uniquely Palean and the evidence found at Lithos were some accidental factors.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 357 350
No. of Characters: 1775 1500
No. of Different Words: 163 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.347 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.972 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.461 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 143 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.946 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.833 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.355 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.57 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.131 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The archaeologist department search anci...
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Line 1, column 559, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...hat the basket was not uniquely Palean. Furthermore I am discussing about evidences that he...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elp to understand the argument better. However, in the argument author only sai...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n that Hindi language belongs to them. Furthermore, due to natural calamities t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e Palean baskets were uniquely Palean. Additionally, In the ancient time people...
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Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...me does not mean that the basket is not belong to particular place. Finally, it is...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ket is not belong to particular place. Finally, it is found that the Basket may...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concluding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: concluding
...ge. The aforementioned arguments forced to conclude that the basket may be uniquely Palean ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Lithos were some accidental factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, similarly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 55.5748502994 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 357.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09243697479 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53919675971 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46218487395 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 705.55239521 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6191488094 57.8364921388 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.70786347227 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283974083588 0.218282227539 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970572153834 0.0743258471296 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138964123502 0.0701772020484 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158626293694 0.128457276422 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986400715993 0.0628817314937 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 98.500998004 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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