Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archaeologists discovered such a "Palean" basket in Lithos, an ancient village across the Brim River from Palea. The Brim River is very deep and broad, and so the ancient Paleans could have crossed it only by boat, and no Palean boats have been found. Thus it follows that the so-called Palean baskets were not uniquely Palean.
The argument claims that Woven baskets which were previously found in nearby areas of prehistoric village of Palea was believed to be made only by Palean people only, but since the archaeologists found a “Palean” basket in Lithos, the distinctive Woven basket that were earlier associated with the Palean people are no longer uniquely identified by them. The Brim River , which is very deep and broad is said to be the reason for making this claim. The archaeologists claim that since there are no Palean boats found, the Palean had no means to travel to the other village in Litho and thus not able to carry the Palean Woven baskets with them. This claim holds many assumptions and does provide proper evidences regarding the claim.
The reason that if something is not found, then it didn’t exist is not a proper justification to give for any argument. The author mentioning that there were no “Palean” boats arises questions like, were there any distinctive pattern for boats also to identify them as Palean boats? Is there any theory that Palean did not use the normal boats for travelling. Nothing has been mentioned about the boats being uniquely identifiable as “Palean” boat in the argument.
Secondly, the Woven basket found in Lithos village could have come there by some external natural force. It may be a possibility that the river water carried some of the Palean baskets to the Lithos village. Several natural forces like flood and cyclone can be accounted responsible for this. Thirdly, the author did not mention that if the people of Lithos had any kind of transport to cross the river. The author has ignored the point that the Lithos people had a boat to travel between the villages and they brought the ”Palean” Woven basket to Lithos.
Lastly, the author talks about the basket to be earlier characterized by the prehistoric Palean village. The author mentions the Brim river between the villages of Palean and Lithos. The author assumes that the Brim river was originated before or since the prehistoric period of Palean village. The author negates the possibility that the Brim river could have originated after the extinction of Palean village. It could be one of the reason that the Palean village did not need any boats to travel to the villages of Lithos.
To conclude, the author argument that the Woven basket was not uniquely associated with the Palean as Palean did not have the boats to travel between the Palea and Lithos is not justified.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...asket found in Lithos village could have come there by some external natural forc...
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...ossibility that the river water carried some of the Palean baskets to the Lithos village. S...
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...e prehistoric period of Palean village. The author negates the possibility that the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276150627615 0.25644967241 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.171548117155 0.15541462614 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0439330543933 0.0836205057962 53% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0564853556485 0.0520304965353 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0146443514644 0.0272364105082 54% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117154811715 0.125424944231 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0418410041841 0.0416121511921 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75212764134 2.79052419416 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334728033473 0.026700313972 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.138075313808 0.113004496875 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010460251046 0.0255425247493 41% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00627615062762 0.0127820249294 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2525.0 2731.13054187 92% => OK
No of words: 422.0 446.07635468 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98341232227 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357819905213 0.378187486979 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.206161137441 0.287650121315 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135071090047 0.208842608468 65% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0947867298578 0.135150697306 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75212764134 2.79052419416 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 207.018472906 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.390995260664 0.469332199767 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.8632701011 52.1807786196 80% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.039408867 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2105263158 23.2022227129 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.831253364 57.7814097925 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.894736842 141.986410481 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2105263158 23.2022227129 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.736842105263 0.724660767414 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.58251231527 167% => OK
Readability: 42.8266400599 51.9672348444 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.79310344828 1.8405768891 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.472618940504 0.441005458295 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.189449395983 0.135418324435 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.126685816295 0.0829849096947 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.652218929893 0.58762219726 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.186059154133 0.147661913831 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215252842612 0.193483328276 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107287917776 0.0970749176394 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.524978555409 0.42659136922 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.140736270617 0.0774707102158 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324685229491 0.312017818177 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957046410524 0.0698173142475 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.82512315271 207% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.82389162562 354% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 14.657635468 109% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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