1- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology has positive effective and negative effective in human life. I believe that as people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think of themselves will surely deteriorate. People need to using technology in many ways. For example, robots have been made to help in surgery and serve patients. These robots are a sample of great achieve successful that save human life. While these advanced technological devices do doctors have more time to search and survey about new important problems that treat health's people. They could try new methods to discover a cure against disease and find a new strategy to cure unfamiliar diseases. So rely on technology in surgery cases is very helpful and important.
Another example, education needs for technology. When students use an iPod, laptop, and computer to do their homework, saver their time and do homer work fast. Maybe in that extra time, without any concern about lack of time to do their homework, they could able to do more research about their favorite things expect for homework, like that pat, sport, and movie.
Sometimes technology should be used more carefully. A lot of gadgets are downloaded to our cellphone to busy our free time. Most people interested in using google for everything. It doesn't seem very helpful to extend our brain system in a long time, that to find an answer before you thinking about them. We should think deeper about the subject. Try to memorize them and we have to be serious about using google for remembering any things or any idea before thinking about them carefully. Some people download a lot of the social network to read short information about everything. When you asked them to explain more details about that latest information they have read in the social, unfortunately, most of them can't remember and don’t have extra information, maybe they like to know about everything in lower grade, but I believe that people should read the book and using less of the social network for getting information. All of the information shared by people can't be true. In conclusion, Technology is very useful for people and but people try to rely on it in the right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: NEED_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'need to use'?
Suggestion: need to use
...mselves will surely deteriorate. People need to using technology in many ways. For example, r...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...sted in using google for everything. It doesnt seem very helpful to extend our brain s...
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Line 5, column 716, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...the social, unfortunately, most of them cant remember and don't have extra info...
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Line 5, column 935, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...social network for getting information. All of the information shared by people cant be tr...
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Line 5, column 975, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...All of the information shared by people cant be true. In conclusion, Technology is v...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92761394102 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56211074029 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509383378016 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.948072741 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5238095238 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42857142857 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248649610809 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818497066022 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10328075701 0.0758088955206 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160707807337 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863898003007 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.